birthday party invitations - It's Time to RAWR-TY!

Tags: birthday party invitations, Dinosaur, Dino, Rawr, Boy, Big One, T-Rex

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Karie Soland
  • Minted Apr 13, 2018
  • 1 Comment made

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This foil pressed dino birthday invitation will make you want to RAWR!

tags:

birthday party invitations, Dinosaur, Dino, Rawr, Boy, Big One, T-Rex

colors shown:

Navy Blue & Kelly Green

design inspired by:

Foil-pressed

submitted on:

Apr 13 2018

average score:

2.39

comments:

6

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birthday party invitations - It's Time to RAWR-TY! by Karie Soland

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Karie Soland on Apr 13, 2018 at 11:50am
Karie Soland
  • Minted Apr 13, 2018
  • 1 Comment made

Let me know what you think - I love feedback to make my designs the best they can be!

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Jennifer Kimberly on Apr 14, 2018 at 8:45pm
Jennifer Kimberly
  • Minted Apr 2, 2018
  • 117 Comments made
  • 988 Votes cast

I really like this concept!i feel like the top three lines are competing. 'rawr it's a big one', 'stomp stomp it's time to rawr-ty', and 'brody is turning one' - my suggestion would be to focus on the middle one and put the other two in similar texts to each other for blance

Audra Candelaria on Apr 16, 2018 at 9:00am
Audra Candelaria
  • Minted Jan 31, 2018
  • 78 Comments made
  • 433 Votes cast

I think since everything is so close to the edge and you do have some elements nearly touching the edge that it may be a good idea to extend some of them off the edge of the paper. I think "rawr could definitely be extended on both sides to be going off the edge slightly. I would also extend the pattern off the edge. This way it will appear to be done on purpose rather than having everything feel like it is trying to be crowded in to fit on the paper.

Kelly Morris on Apr 20, 2018 at 2:06pm
Kelly Morris
  • Minted Apr 8, 2018
  • 12 Comments made
  • 387 Votes cast

Cute Design! I would agree with Audra's comment on extending the "RAWR" off the edge. I think because there are so many different typefaces used they are all competing with each other.

Carly Kewley on Apr 25, 2018 at 11:27am
Carly Kewley
  • Minted Apr 24, 2018
  • 9 Comments made
  • 108 Votes cast

haha! I love the 'rawr-ty'! What about swapping 'brody is turning one' with 'stomp stomp'? Then moving the idea of 'stomp, stomp' to the bodington residence like: stomp your way to the party, then have the address listed below. I'd like to see another option in there with the gold foil. The RAWR looks nice with the gold foil, but seems a little off balance maybe. Could just be me, too. What about the having the separators for the date as gold foil, and the two embellishments by the address in gold foil. Could make those a little smaller too, maybe 25% smaller?

Julee London on May 2, 2018 at 11:29am
Julee London
  • Minted Dec 7, 2014
  • 7 Awards
  • 629 Comments made
  • 12978 Votes cast

Maybe downsize the "rawr" at the top? (Or take it larger and completely outside the borders of the page.) Printing always help me gauge sizing IRL. Maybe you'll see that a little more navy around the edges would give more balance.