birthday party invitations - Woodland Camping Birthday

Tags: birthday party invitations, camp, camping, bear, campfire, woods, woodland, watercolor, hand-painted, animals, trees

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Cake and Flower Paper
  • Minted Apr 8, 2018
  • 13 Comments made
  • 12 Votes cast

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comments from Deanna:

This wildly cute birthday party invitation features a hand-painted watercolor illustration of a camping scene. Perfect for a girl or boy party!

tags:

birthday party invitations, camp, camping, bear, campfire, woods, woodland, watercolor, hand-painted, animals, trees

colors shown:

Gray, Green, Pink, Blue

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Apr 08 2018

Edited on:

Apr 08 2018

average score:

2.64

comments:

13

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Cake and Flower Paper on Apr 8, 2018 at 1:59pm
Cake and Flower Paper
  • Minted Apr 8, 2018
  • 13 Comments made
  • 12 Votes cast

Hi, this is my first time submitting, would appreciate your feedback! Especially on the fonts. Thank you!

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Erin German Design on Apr 9, 2018 at 4:59am
Erin German Design
  • Minted May 17, 2014
  • 4 Awards
  • 181 Comments made
  • 9592 Votes cast

Cutest ever. :)

Elky Ink on Apr 9, 2018 at 5:07pm
Elky Ink
  • Minted Oct 30, 2016
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  • 1757 Comments made
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Adorable!

Lucia Baertl on Apr 9, 2018 at 9:55pm
Lucia Baertl
  • Minted Mar 28, 2018
  • 21 Comments made
  • 1239 Votes cast

Maybe you could make the bears faces a little bit more intense in color, they get a little lost

Jenn Rice on Apr 13, 2018 at 12:43pm
Jenn Rice
  • Minted Aug 17, 2016
  • 1 Award
  • 44 Comments made
  • 3656 Votes cast

Super cute! I agree about the bears being a bit darker, currently my eye goes the the tree on the left first.

Rae Kaiser on Apr 18, 2018 at 5:33pm
Rae Kaiser
  • Minted Oct 31, 2016
  • 5 Awards
  • 86 Comments made
  • 8297 Votes cast

Very sweet Deanna. I would vary the weight of the type. Maybe make the day/time/place in a bold. And try to give more room around the type and the illustration. Good job on your first submission.

Erica Zeisler on Apr 21, 2018 at 7:08am
Erica Zeisler
  • Minted Apr 17, 2018
  • 3 Comments made
  • 129 Votes cast

Super cute. I agree with making the bears a bit darker.

Elizabeth Peitzman on Apr 24, 2018 at 10:02am
Elizabeth Peitzman
  • Minted Apr 16, 2018
  • 11 Comments made
  • 217 Votes cast

I like your design. Maybe a background color would make the bears pop more. Try giving a little space between font and bears. Good luck!

Nicole Winn on Apr 26, 2018 at 10:38am
Nicole Winn
  • Minted Jan 24, 2017
  • 1 Award
  • 19 Comments made
  • 47 Votes cast

I agree about the font space above the bears. Also, I would reduce the size of the font between the trees a bit.... the address part is a bit too big (close to the trees) as well as reducing the RSVP section a tiny bit. Cute stuff!

Natosha on May 1, 2018 at 3:51pm

This is really cute! I would recommend moving your name banner up, increasing the size of the age/birthday a smidge to give it more emphasis and differentiate from the rest of the type. If you tighten up the kerning from at least the address down to the phone number, I think it will give the trees more breathing room.

Julee London on May 2, 2018 at 11:26am
Julee London
  • Minted Dec 7, 2014
  • 7 Awards
  • 657 Comments made
  • 13303 Votes cast

Perhaps rotate and center the banner more. Something feels a little unaligned at the top. Can the trees be moved out to the sides a little to create more white space on the sides of the words? ...Or try a condensed font to keep the text more in the center of the design.

Julee London on May 2, 2018 at 11:26am
Julee London
  • Minted Dec 7, 2014
  • 7 Awards
  • 657 Comments made
  • 13303 Votes cast

Perhaps rotate and center the banner more. Something feels a little unaligned at the top. Can the trees be moved out to the sides a little to create more white space on the sides of the words? ...Or try a condensed font to keep the text more in the center of the design. Cute watercolors!

The Lovely Desk on May 3, 2018 at 9:21am
The Lovely Desk
  • Minted Oct 13, 2013
  • 5 Comments made
  • 648 Votes cast

I agree with Julie on trying a more condensed font to allow for some white space between your trees and the text. The design is cute!