greeting card - The Adventure Begins

Tags: greeting card, camper, campervan, VW, adventure, travel, traveller, journey, outdoors, see you soon, goodbye

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Rebecca Humphreys
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comments from Rebecca:

This card features a modern campervan to welcome new adventures

card copy (front):

the adventure begins

card copy (inside):

enjoy every moment

tags:

greeting card, camper, campervan, VW, adventure, travel, traveller, journey, outdoors, see you soon, goodbye

colors shown:

blue, white, pink, grey

fonts:

Miletta Typeface, Dear Hearts

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 21 2018

Edited on:

Mar 10 2018

score:

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comments:

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greeting card - The Adventure Begins by Rebecca Humphreys

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Rebecca Humphreys on Feb 21, 2018 at 3:55pm
Rebecca Humphreys
  • Minted Feb 7, 2015
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  • 344 Comments made
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Does the font choice work?

Rebecca Humphreys on Feb 21, 2018 at 4:08pm
Rebecca Humphreys
  • Minted Feb 7, 2015
  • 7 Awards
  • 344 Comments made
  • 2588 Votes cast

Does the inside of the card make sense?

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cathy on Mar 24, 2018 at 5:07am

cute copy good color of ‘adventure’ throws me

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Debb W on Feb 26, 2018 at 8:43pm
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Hi Rebecca, I like the update on B. There have been a lot of 'adventure begins' cards for new baby, engagement, marriage, so I wasn't sure what this design was for until I read the tags. Maybe instead of The adventure begins write, "As your new adventure begins" or "the next adventure begins" Love your illustration!

Keri Barbas Steckler on Feb 27, 2018 at 11:09am
Keri Barbas Steckler
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love simplicity of art and theme-- wish copy was tweaked a bit- more clever

Paper Raven Co. on Mar 7, 2018 at 6:38am
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I like A best. It took me a moment to find the rest of the sentence in B. A is stronger in my opinion :)

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Rebecca Humphreys on Feb 22, 2018 at 3:07pm
Rebecca Humphreys
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Copy by myself

Elky Ink on Feb 22, 2018 at 4:26pm
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I love it! The detail work, color choices, copy all great! One thing you might try is matching the window tint to the background to give the appearance that they are clear.

Elky Ink on Feb 22, 2018 at 4:29pm
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One other thing. Is the window on the far left a vent window or the front window. If its the front then there would be an edge on the part that goes around to other side of the van. Does that make sense?

Elky Ink on Feb 22, 2018 at 4:29pm
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One other thing. Is the window on the far left a vent window or the front window. If its the front then there would be an edge on the part that goes around to other side of the van. Does that make sense?

Kanika Mathur on Feb 22, 2018 at 5:34pm
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Love your detailed illustration and copy! You could play around with other fonts, maybe try a simple all caps for 'the' and 'begins'?

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