wedding invitations - Ocean Dots

Tags: wedding invitations, ocean, wave, caribbean, wedding invitation

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Christine Wagner
  • Minted Feb 27, 2010
  • 11 Comments made

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comments from christine:

Caribbean ocean fun.

tags:

wedding invitations, ocean, wave, caribbean, wedding invitation

colors shown:

navy and caribbean blue with black

fonts:

gillsans and sloop

design inspired by:

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submitted on:

Feb 28 2010

average score:

2.28

comments:

6

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wedding invitations - Ocean Dots by Christine Wagner

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Jody Wody on Mar 7, 2010 at 5:33pm
Jody Wody
  • Minted Nov 20, 2008
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Hi again. :) Okay, for this one, I would make sure your script has the tracking set to zero, and possibly bump up the font size a couple points. The three center lines seem a little off - if they are meant to be right aligned, I would make sure they line up exactly. But, if they are meant to be staggered, I'd make it a lot more obvious. The dots are a cute idea, but I think they need more contrast (for instance, some dots larger, some smaller, and perhaps some outlined rather than solid). Hope this helps!

Christine Wagner on Mar 8, 2010 at 6:39am
Christine Wagner
  • Minted Feb 27, 2010
  • 11 Comments made

Thanks for your feedback!

Alison Michael on Mar 8, 2010 at 1:56pm
Alison Michael
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I agree with Jody's comments. This could be really really nice.

Christine Wagner on Mar 8, 2010 at 2:13pm
Christine Wagner
  • Minted Feb 27, 2010
  • 11 Comments made

Thanks again, may not be able to make revisions in time for judging but will do them anyway!

kelli hall on Mar 17, 2010 at 6:58pm
kelli hall
  • Minted Oct 24, 2008
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i love how the actual lines of type are suggestive of ocean waves. very subtle, but it reinforces the idea in an elegant way ; ) Also, i know its too late now, but It would be so cool to see what would happen if you dropped all of the type so the couples names hit the midline

Christine Wagner on Mar 18, 2010 at 6:29am
Christine Wagner
  • Minted Feb 27, 2010
  • 11 Comments made

Thanks Kelli for your comments!