wedding invitations - Canapés and Cocktails

Tags: wedding invitations, bowtie, flourish, warm grey, black, achromatic

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LNL
  • Minted Feb 12, 2010
  • 8 Comments made
  • 517 Votes cast

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comments from Leana:

A sleek, modern design featuring justified typography. Perfect with any hue.

tags:

wedding invitations, bowtie, flourish, warm grey, black, achromatic

colors shown:

Warm Oyster Grey, Black, White

fonts:

Avant Garde Book BT

design inspired by:

x

submitted on:

Feb 26 2010

Edited on:

Mar 05 2010

average score:

1.62

comments:

4

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final average score: 1.62
wedding invitations - Canapés and Cocktails by LNL

comments

LNL on Feb 26, 2010 at 9:10pm
LNL
  • Minted Feb 12, 2010
  • 8 Comments made
  • 517 Votes cast

Tossing up between having a transparent or solid colour for the text section - and perhaps without the border? Any opinions would be greatly appreciated =]

Jackie Mangiolino on Feb 27, 2010 at 5:20am
Jackie Mangiolino
  • Minted Nov 7, 2009
  • 19 Awards
  • 841 Comments made
  • 29641 Votes cast

I would make it solid. It's too busy right now and the text is difficult to read. I would also ditch the little heart at the bottom, it seems out of place.

LNL on Feb 27, 2010 at 9:41pm
LNL
  • Minted Feb 12, 2010
  • 8 Comments made
  • 517 Votes cast

Thankyou Jackie. Taking a break and looking at the design again, I agree, it was too busy - and the heart was, as you said, out of place. I think this is definitely an improvement on the last submission so thanks for the tips

LNL on Mar 5, 2010 at 10:23pm
LNL
  • Minted Feb 12, 2010
  • 8 Comments made
  • 517 Votes cast

Design overhaul - comments and/or criticisms would be much appreciated if you feel so obliged