wedding invitations - Tie The Knot

Tags: wedding invitations, Knot, Yellow, Gray

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Megan Bryan
  • Minted Oct 6, 2009
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Modern Design for an Informal Wedding

tags:

wedding invitations, Knot, Yellow, Gray

colors shown:

Yellow, Gold and Gray

fonts:

Gotham

design inspired by:

x

submitted on:

Feb 17 2010

Edited on:

Mar 08 2010

average score:

2.62

comments:

12

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wedding invitations - Tie The Knot by Megan Bryan

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Megan Bryan on Feb 17, 2010 at 9:33am
Megan Bryan
  • Minted Oct 6, 2009
  • 12 Comments made
  • 1057 Votes cast

I'm struggling with a few things on this design so I would love to get some feedback. Thanks!

Jackie Mangiolino on Feb 17, 2010 at 2:26pm
Jackie Mangiolino
  • Minted Nov 7, 2009
  • 19 Awards
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I feel like there's too much empty space. Maybe a pattern on the background? Or something to boost the typography?

someone loves dean on Feb 17, 2010 at 5:45pm
someone loves dean
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Cute idea. The justified type seems too forced. Play with the tracking and size to make it more comfortable.

Sara Heilwagen on Feb 18, 2010 at 11:21am
Sara Heilwagen
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I think the strong yellow border is pulling focus away from the text. Perhaps a softer shade.

Lisa Razza on Feb 18, 2010 at 11:24am
Lisa Razza
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I just did a "Tying the knot" design also, but it's different! I like the wide frame and the colors. I agree with megan- maybe the justified type has too much space between it.

- Keg Design - on Feb 19, 2010 at 5:57am
- Keg Design -
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i love the color palette!

uphill industries on Feb 19, 2010 at 9:59am
uphill industries
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I agree about the color palate--it is gorgeous. I like the idea of the justified type, but I think that there is too much space between words.

Megan Bryan on Feb 24, 2010 at 2:49pm
Megan Bryan
  • Minted Oct 6, 2009
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Thank you for all the suggestions. I've updated the designs and any more suggestions are welcomed.

Ann Gardner on Feb 25, 2010 at 1:46pm
Ann Gardner
  • Minted Feb 22, 2010
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Love the simplicity of this design! My only comment would be that it could be read as an announcement and not an invitation. Have you considered including some copy along the lines of "please join us" or "you're invited"?

Elena Kloppenburg on Mar 4, 2010 at 3:42am
Elena Kloppenburg
  • Minted Mar 3, 2010
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I love it! I think the yellow border works perfectly...

Citrus Press Co. on Mar 4, 2010 at 1:54pm
Citrus Press Co.
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Nice and simple, very sweet.

uphill industries on Mar 6, 2010 at 7:31am
uphill industries
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i love this update! it might benefit from a "please join us," but i think it's pretty and works well as-is, too.