invitations - Dove Baptism

Tags: invitations, baptism design, dove, golden dove

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Ilze Lucero
  • Minted Jun 16, 2015
  • 19 Awards
  • 6692 Comments made
  • 78225 Votes cast

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comments from Ilze:

Lovely baptism design with dove

tags:

invitations, baptism design, dove, golden dove

colors shown:

blue, white

fonts:

selfie, walkway

design inspired by:

Baptism & Christening (foil)

submitted on:

Sep 08 2017

Edited on:

Sep 26 2017

average score:

2.25

comments:

0

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invitations - Dove Baptism by Ilze Lucero

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Ilze Lucero on Sep 8, 2017 at 7:54am
Ilze Lucero
  • Minted Jun 16, 2015
  • 19 Awards
  • 6692 Comments made
  • 78225 Votes cast

feedback greatly appreciated

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escargot postale on Sep 21, 2017 at 7:19am
escargot postale
  • Minted Dec 7, 2012
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borderless doesnt distract, warm background brings out warmth of illustraton

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raven erebus on Sep 16, 2017 at 5:47pm
raven erebus
  • Minted Jan 30, 2015
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Maybe try making the blue lines in the background thinner, and more of them? maybe to match the width of the font.

Becky Nimoy on Sep 17, 2017 at 7:25am
Becky Nimoy
  • Minted Mar 29, 2011
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Great layout and dove design. I would make the blue less saturated and I think you can remove the very top blue lines and bottom and have just the square with dove. Also the body text needs to be thicker or larger

Fox and Hound on Sep 20, 2017 at 8:56am
Fox and Hound
  • Minted Sep 15, 2017
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I feel like your intro headline gets lost in the pattern since the font you're using is visually similar. Maybe try the Walkway font instead of the script in that section for better legibility. I also feel like you're missing the word "the" between "please join us to celebrate" and "BAPTISM". Love the layout and illustration you chose!