party invitations - Retro Camping Trailer

Tags: party invitations, camping, bunting, forest, s'mores, campfire, pink, girl, green, camper, trailer, vintage, retro, teal, birthday

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Kim Nelson
  • Minted Jun 9, 2010
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This cute girl's birthday invitation features bunting and a retro camping trailer.

tags:

party invitations, camping, bunting, forest, s'mores, campfire, pink, girl, green, camper, trailer, vintage, retro, teal, birthday

colors shown:

pink, teal, green

fonts:

Thirsty rough, luella, trend sans

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Invitation

submitted on:

Apr 10 2013

Edited on:

Apr 11 2013

average score:

3.24

comments:

5

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party invitations - Retro Camping Trailer by Kim Nelson

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Kim Nelson on Apr 11, 2013 at 5:49am
Kim Nelson
  • Minted Jun 9, 2010
  • 18 Comments made
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Is this better as a regular 5x7? With or without the top banner? Any other feedback also appreciated.

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Kim Nelson on Apr 11, 2013 at 12:31pm
Kim Nelson
  • Minted Jun 9, 2010
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Straight, slightly rounded, I am not sure about the grass part...

Danielle Hartgers on Apr 11, 2013 at 6:57pm
Danielle Hartgers
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Like this version with the straight :)

Annie Holmquist on Apr 11, 2013 at 8:41pm
Annie Holmquist
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Great changes! Looks adorable and now the trailer really stands out.

Carol Fazio on Apr 12, 2013 at 5:49am
Carol Fazio
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sweet illustrations!

Kim Dietrich Elam on Apr 15, 2013 at 8:54pm
Kim Dietrich Elam
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Love that camper!!

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Danielle Hartgers on Apr 11, 2013 at 12:16pm
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Nice improvement! Looking at the trailer and the tree placement, I too think the hill looks off. Maybe straight, or sitting right on top?

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Kim Nelson on Apr 11, 2013 at 5:46am
Kim Nelson
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Is this better?

Annie Holmquist on Apr 11, 2013 at 11:27am
Annie Holmquist
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I think it looks much better on the standard A7 and without the bunting. I am curious how it would look if the trailer were sitting on top of the hill, maybe making the hill smaller somehow. Not sure if it would make much difference but I still think that the camper should be the focus. It's really cute. Overall it looks great!

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Kim Nelson on Apr 10, 2013 at 5:56pm
Kim Nelson
  • Minted Jun 9, 2010
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Feedback welcome and appreciated :)

Danielle Hartgers on Apr 10, 2013 at 7:40pm
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So cute! I don't think you need the banner at the top - it takes away from your cute drawing below. Then just bring all your text up a touch :)

Annie Holmquist on Apr 10, 2013 at 7:42pm
Annie Holmquist
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I agree with Danielle. That cute little camper should be the focus. I would also try it as just a plain 5 x 7 instead of the tag. Really adorable illustrations!