invitations - Beautiful Girl 16th Party

Tags: invitations, Sweet 16 party, very modern, simple, classic, adult, classic, purple colors, fun, lovable

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Kristen Niedzielski
  • Minted Jun 5, 2017
  • 159 Comments made
  • 2569 Votes cast

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comments from Kristen:

Very modern, fun, and creative party invitation. Colors match the photo. Simple and sweet.

tags:

invitations, Sweet 16 party, very modern, simple, classic, adult, classic, purple colors, fun, lovable

colors shown:

Purple, Blue, Gray

fonts:

Letter Gothic STD, Mustache Script, Lithos Pro, Lao Sangram MN

design inspired by:

Sweet Sixteen (non-foil)

submitted on:

Sep 01 2017

Edited on:

Sep 19 2017

average score:

1.61

comments:

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invitations - Beautiful Girl 16th Party by Kristen Niedzielski

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Kristen Niedzielski on Sep 12, 2017 at 3:18pm
Kristen Niedzielski
  • Minted Jun 5, 2017
  • 159 Comments made
  • 2569 Votes cast

Is this invitation too casual. Any other advice is great.

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Abby Reid on Sep 13, 2017 at 5:01pm
Abby Reid
  • Minted Oct 19, 2014
  • 1 Award
  • 562 Comments made
  • 770 Votes cast

I don't think it's too casual... after all it is for 16 year olds (who, of course, think they are adults!). The offset makes a nice implied frame around her face. Good luck in the challenges... Abby

Learoy Ann on Sep 15, 2017 at 7:11am
Learoy Ann
  • Minted May 10, 2016
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  • 2356 Votes cast

You can make another variation where the word "Sweet 16" is bigger and the rest would adjust if needed. Just a thought. Overall, would love to see different colors with this design.

raven erebus on Sep 16, 2017 at 5:36pm
raven erebus
  • Minted Jan 30, 2015
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The different widths on the grey bugs me. Maybe it's just me...

Becky Nimoy on Sep 17, 2017 at 7:10am
Becky Nimoy
  • Minted Mar 29, 2011
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  • 31166 Votes cast

I like the retro feel of this, but all of the various fonts are competing with each other. Try using 1 or two fonts only, "Sweet 16" looks great, but the name looks like something you would use for a word doc.

Amanda Ansel on Sep 17, 2017 at 1:16pm
Amanda Ansel
  • Minted Sep 7, 2015
  • 28 Comments made
  • 618 Votes cast

Using no more than two or at most three different types of fonts would unify this more. I like the retro vibe. :)

Cynthia L. delaCruz on Sep 18, 2017 at 6:16pm
Cynthia L. delaCruz
  • Minted Sep 13, 2017
  • 9 Comments made
  • 113 Votes cast

I agree with the other feedback on this. I would narrow it down to 2 fonts, but keep the layout, which is pretty unique.

Version 2 - submitted on Sep 01 2017 - no comments

Version 1 - submitted on Sep 01 2017 - no comments