party invitations - Mysteriously Missing

Tags: party invitations, hat, magnifying glass, fingerprint, shoeprint

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Amy Wadeson
  • Minted Feb 17, 2013
  • 52 Comments made
  • 1742 Votes cast

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A simple, iconic design with a call to action for the party guests to help solve a mystery!

tags:

party invitations, hat, magnifying glass, fingerprint, shoeprint

colors shown:

blue, brown

fonts:

AW Conqueror Slab, Ostrich

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Invitation

submitted on:

Apr 05 2013

Edited on:

Apr 14 2013

average score:

2.47

comments:

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party invitations - Mysteriously Missing by Amy Wadeson

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Amy Wadeson on Apr 5, 2013 at 9:41pm
Amy Wadeson
  • Minted Feb 17, 2013
  • 52 Comments made
  • 1742 Votes cast

Any feedback appreciated! Thank you!

Amy Wadeson on Apr 6, 2013 at 7:37pm
Amy Wadeson
  • Minted Feb 17, 2013
  • 52 Comments made
  • 1742 Votes cast

Thoughts on this version compared to the original?

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Version 2 - submitted on Apr 05 2013 - hide

Marleigh Miller on Apr 7, 2013 at 9:28pm
Marleigh Miller
  • Minted Nov 18, 2012
  • 47 Comments made
  • 2375 Votes cast

Overall I think this is really cute, and much tidier than the original. My only comment would be on the date type—it feels too bold for the rest of the type. Perhaps something in a lighter weight?

Jana J on Apr 8, 2013 at 2:01pm
Jana J
  • Minted Apr 3, 2013
  • 59 Comments made
  • 1280 Votes cast

I definitely like this version, agree with Marleigh's suggestion and you could nudge the whole info text a tad down.

Version 1 - submitted on Apr 05 2013 - hide

Amy Wadeson on Apr 5, 2013 at 9:41pm
Amy Wadeson
  • Minted Feb 17, 2013
  • 52 Comments made
  • 1742 Votes cast

Feedback appreciated!!

Leslie Ann Jones on Apr 6, 2013 at 9:55am
Leslie Ann Jones
  • Minted Jun 9, 2010
  • 24 Awards
  • 669 Comments made
  • 14330 Votes cast

Hi Amy - I really like the idea behind this, but I think there's just too much going on. My eye doesn't know where to look first. Maybe you can simplify the text a bit. I don't think you have to spell everything out. The icons are indicative enough without all of the words :)

Amy Wadeson on Apr 6, 2013 at 10:39am
Amy Wadeson
  • Minted Feb 17, 2013
  • 52 Comments made
  • 1742 Votes cast

Thank you for your feedback Leslie! I certainly agree with you that there is A LOT going on. I'm going to work on simplifying it. :) I appreciate you taking the time to help me!