invitations - Re-Affirmations II

Tags: invitations, baptism, re-affirmation, adult, immersion, river, lake, bubbles, abstract, pop art, modern, watercolor, apres andy worhol, avis f reid, abby reid, large scale design, silver foil, gold foil

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Abby Reid
  • Minted Oct 19, 2014
  • 1 Award
  • 562 Comments made
  • 770 Votes cast

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Adult Re-Affirmation of Baptismal Covenant

tags:

invitations, baptism, re-affirmation, adult, immersion, river, lake, bubbles, abstract, pop art, modern, watercolor, apres andy worhol, avis f reid, abby reid, large scale design, silver foil, gold foil

colors shown:

silver foil, black, blue, red, gold glitter

fonts:

Bonnie, Sanvito Pro,

design inspired by:

Baptism & Christening (non-foil)

submitted on:

Sep 16 2017

Edited on:

Sep 19 2017

average score:

1.43

comments:

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invitations - Re-Affirmations II by Abby Reid

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Abby Reid on Sep 16, 2017 at 12:18pm
Abby Reid
  • Minted Oct 19, 2014
  • 1 Award
  • 562 Comments made
  • 770 Votes cast

your help in choosing between these digital abstractions of the same file would be greatly appreciated! ...Abby

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raven erebus on Sep 17, 2017 at 7:05am
raven erebus
  • Minted Jan 30, 2015
  • 20 Awards
  • 1007 Comments made
  • 31193 Votes cast

I'd try to simplify your fonts, and increase the contrast of the font against the background. The text is hard to read.

Sara Curtis on Sep 17, 2017 at 7:26am
Sara Curtis
  • Minted Sep 6, 2014
  • 3 Awards
  • 316 Comments made
  • 18626 Votes cast

The text is really busy and difficult to read on your design. I would suggest choosing two fonts, one sans serif and one script. You can use different sizes and weights to draw attention to the most important information.

Version 1 - submitted on Sep 16 2017 - no comments