invitations - Baptism Photo Montage

Tags: invitations, baptism, celtic, teal, gray, boy

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Dottie Jayne Design Co
  • Minted Sep 9, 2017
  • 2 Comments made

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The many smiling faces in the presence of God

tags:

invitations, baptism, celtic, teal, gray, boy

colors shown:

Teal, Gray, White, Black

fonts:

times new roman

design inspired by:

Baptism & Christening (non-foil)

submitted on:

Sep 13 2017

average score:

1.68

comments:

4

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Dottie Jayne Design Co on Sep 13, 2017 at 8:38am
Dottie Jayne Design Co
  • Minted Sep 9, 2017
  • 2 Comments made

Should I have done the font in a different color?

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raven erebus on Sep 16, 2017 at 5:49pm
raven erebus
  • Minted Jan 30, 2015
  • 17 Awards
  • 971 Comments made
  • 30166 Votes cast

The small text is hard to read. Did you try a .25 stroke on it? Also did you try printing it out to check the size of the photos? I feel like you might want to include less photos, or have the photos take up more of your card.

Fox and Hound on Sep 19, 2017 at 6:12pm
Fox and Hound
  • Minted Sep 15, 2017
  • 15 Comments made
  • 178 Votes cast

I like your layout and organization of information, but I do think the overall design would benefit from increasing the font sizes overall, and in particular the size of the name/headline. It might look nice to try having the name/headline in a different color like a charcoal gray to help it stand out :)

Joanna Griffin on Sep 19, 2017 at 6:37pm
Joanna Griffin
  • Minted Nov 2, 2015
  • 14 Awards
  • 280 Comments made
  • 9225 Votes cast

With all the black and white photos I think black text might stand out more with all the aqua accents. I would also consider removing the underline from the date and time. It seems to break up the info unnecessarily. Love the layout of the photos!!