party invitations - Ahoy Matey!!

Tags: party invitations, pirates, ship, boy, birthday, map,

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Elite Party Creations
  • Minted Mar 19, 2012
  • 10 Comments made
  • 594 Votes cast

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comments from Monica:

This fun map pirate themed invite is great for celebrating your little one's big day!

tags:

party invitations, pirates, ship, boy, birthday, map,

colors shown:

Brown, Red

fonts:

Caribbean Regular, The King of Queen

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Invitation

submitted on:

Apr 03 2013

average score:

1.69

comments:

2

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party invitations - Ahoy Matey!! by Elite Party Creations

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Jacki Loomis on Apr 4, 2013 at 7:19pm
Jacki Loomis
  • Minted Apr 25, 2012
  • 1 Award
  • 427 Comments made
  • 3943 Votes cast

I really like the idea, but I feel like the type isn't very legible--especially the "Captain ????'s Birthday". Maybe try a similar, but slightly cleaner, typeface? I'd also tighten up the leading btwn "Come Join..." and the date, and tighten the kerning between the n and apostrophe. And superscript "th" in 5th.....

Stellax Creative on Apr 11, 2013 at 11:21pm
Stellax Creative
  • Minted Apr 20, 2012
  • 19 Awards
  • 1308 Comments made
  • 10273 Votes cast

I agree with Jacki. It can be a great design, just fix the type. Also, move away the type and some design elements from the border, unless you want them to be cut off.