non-photo holiday cards - Our First Christmas Together

Tags: non-photo holiday cards, wedding, married, christmas, couple, silhouette, hat, snow hat, snowhats

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Lori Wemple
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Christmas greetings for a newly married couple

tags:

non-photo holiday cards, wedding, married, christmas, couple, silhouette, hat, snow hat, snowhats

colors shown:

red, green, black

fonts:

wisdom, brandon grotesque

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Card

submitted on:

Mar 12 2013

Edited on:

Mar 25 2013

average score:

3.29

comments:

0

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non-photo holiday cards - Our First Christmas Together by Lori Wemple

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Version 10 - submitted on Mar 25 2013 - no comments

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Lori Wemple on Mar 25, 2013 at 8:57am
Lori Wemple
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possible alternate colorways

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Version 5 - submitted on Mar 12 2013 - hide

Leslie Ann Jones on Mar 12, 2013 at 1:15pm
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So lovely! The changes are perfect. And I'm still a fan of the white :)

Monica Schafer on Mar 12, 2013 at 4:45pm
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Love the change to the darker ovals and hate to say it but love the white and mint equally :).

Jennifer Wick on Mar 12, 2013 at 5:05pm
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Adorable and so well done!! Definitely white background : )

Phrosne Ras on Mar 12, 2013 at 5:35pm
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ooh oooooh!! so CUTE! I just love everything you do.

Monica Schafer on Mar 13, 2013 at 5:01pm
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I still vote for ovals and love the white best now :).

Stacey Montgomery on Mar 15, 2013 at 4:30pm
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Nice! I like it without the ovals. :-)

Danielle Hartgers on Mar 17, 2013 at 6:59pm
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Really like the white... and would keep the ovals. You have some really great submissions in this challenge!

Frooted Design on Mar 20, 2013 at 4:46pm
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love it! very sweet :) i love the current layout with ovals on white. if i could offer any constructive feedback, it would be to tweak the silhouettes a bit more so that they seem more like those of an adult vs. child (might be the hair on the back of amelie looks like a little pigtail, and the hat on brady could sit a little lower on his head?)

Anais Lee on Mar 22, 2013 at 2:22pm
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It's beautiful Lori. I think the ovals making the characters more stand out. I personally like it with the ovals on white background :) I alos like your first version (red background with black ovals) though. The color is more traditional but makes me feel very happy and Christmasy. How about considering it as a color option when it's for sale?

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Lori Wemple on Mar 12, 2013 at 12:53pm
Lori Wemple
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thinking about losing the ovals... ?

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Carol Fazio on Mar 12, 2013 at 8:52am
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Love your sweet illustrations as always, Lori! This is terrific - love the white background version!! I might suggest eliminating the top branches to make the space feel a little bit open. Have you tried a vertical version to air it out even more. either way, love it!

Monica Schafer on Mar 12, 2013 at 9:07am
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So cute. How about keep the black circles (like you have on the red) and make the background the blue of the circles you have on the white. Or even a soft grey background... just some ideas... awesome design.

Leslie Ann Jones on Mar 12, 2013 at 9:28am
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I love the white background, Lori. This is so sweet. That said, every time I read it in its current form, my eyes see "First Our Christmas Together." Have you tried moving the "our" over "first"? It might help with the flow a bit.

Five Sparrows on Mar 12, 2013 at 10:28am
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I really like this - the white background version especially! Have you tried moving (and angling) the word "Our" to the left - above "First"? Great design!

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Lori Wemple on Mar 12, 2013 at 7:55am
Lori Wemple
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I'm a bit stumped on this... would love ANY feedback. prefer red, or white?