personal stationery - Yacht Club

Tags: personal stationery, red, blue, brown, initial stripes

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  • Minted Dec 29, 2009
  • 14 Comments made
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comments from stephanie:

unisex design, classic look

tags:

personal stationery, red, blue, brown, initial stripes

colors shown:

camel, blue, red

fonts:

Iskoola Pota

design inspired by:

Men's Stationery

submitted on:

Jan 17 2010

Edited on:

Jan 17 2010

average score:

1.46

comments:

5

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Design Lotus on Jan 17, 2010 at 12:46pm
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I think there's too much going on here. Simplify by taking away the brown and red boxes on the card. Repeat the double red lines on both sides on the monogram. Not sure if the address is necessary at the bottom either.

paper ink. on Jan 17, 2010 at 8:16pm
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  • Minted Dec 29, 2009
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Thank you! Love the feedback and suggestions-you were right, too busy!! rethinking it over resulted in a altogether new version. What do you think?

Design Lotus on Jan 17, 2010 at 8:40pm
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Still doesn't say yacht club to me. It feel more Capitol Hill-ish. Try incorporating similar design elements like this flag. - http://www.americantowns.com/fetchimage.php?url=/img/uploads/groups/2008/6/11/img4850899127664.gif&maxsize=300

paper ink. on Jan 17, 2010 at 8:57pm
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  • Minted Dec 29, 2009
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your right--i probably should have changed the name when I changed direction! Thanks for the inspiration image-I may have a "yacht club" and a "capitol club"!

Sincerely Jackie on Jan 23, 2010 at 6:58am
Sincerely Jackie
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I don't know if it was intentional, but it looks like maybe you left the original guide line on the label.