personal stationery - Striped Personal Stationary

Tags: personal stationery, stripes

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Oneleven Creative
  • Minted Jan 11, 2010
  • 6 Comments made
  • 1033 Votes cast

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comments from Laura:

Clean and modern design for a contemporary man

tags:

personal stationery, stripes

colors shown:

blue and gray

fonts:

futura

design inspired by:

Men's Stationery

submitted on:

Jan 11 2010

average score:

2.27

comments:

5

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personal stationery - Striped Personal Stationary by Oneleven Creative

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Oneleven Creative on Jan 11, 2010 at 1:19pm
Oneleven Creative
  • Minted Jan 11, 2010
  • 6 Comments made
  • 1033 Votes cast

Comments are welcome!

Design Lotus on Jan 11, 2010 at 8:44pm
Design Lotus
  • Minted May 9, 2008
  • 211 Awards
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Good start. My suggestions are to have the lines intersect perpendicularly (90 degrees). On the label, I would remove the stripes to the right and make the stripes on the left bigger. Nice colors and clean design.

Oneleven Creative on Jan 13, 2010 at 8:36am
Oneleven Creative
  • Minted Jan 11, 2010
  • 6 Comments made
  • 1033 Votes cast

Thanks for the suggestions. I'm really quite fond of the intersecting lines, but I'm going to try changing the label around.

RedRedOrange on Jan 14, 2010 at 9:44am
RedRedOrange
  • Minted Jan 12, 2010
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I love this design! It is so hard for me to design things for men, but I can totally see my husband using these. Nice work :0)

hannahcloud DESIGN on Jan 20, 2010 at 9:00pm
hannahcloud DESIGN
  • Minted Oct 27, 2009
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I love the madmen feel of this. I think the lines intersect at a great angle, but I do agree that it could look cleaner with the label's right lines eliminated.