minibook cards - Just Born

Tags: minibook cards, cars, driving, baby

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Marnie Bello
  • Minted Dec 2, 2012
  • 37 Comments made
  • 136 Votes cast

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comments from marnie:

Welcome your little guy or gal in class, style and fun!

tags:

minibook cards, cars, driving, baby

colors shown:

Blue and Green

fonts:

Nickalodeon, Trejan Pro Regular and bold

design inspired by:

Birth Announcement Minibook

submitted on:

Feb 09 2013

average score:

1.65

comments:

4

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minibook cards - Just Born by Marnie Bello

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Marnie Bello on Feb 9, 2013 at 2:06pm
Marnie Bello
  • Minted Dec 2, 2012
  • 37 Comments made
  • 136 Votes cast

Comments are welcome! I'm a new designer! I would love feedback!

Lori Wemple on Feb 12, 2013 at 1:00pm
Lori Wemple
  • Minted Nov 19, 2011
  • 398 Awards
  • 4624 Comments made
  • 11383 Votes cast

Hi Marnie - welcome to the minted community - it is a great place to learn and grow :) Your design is very sweet, and your car is adorable. I'm still leaning myself, but a couple comments I can share (and sorry that this is after the editing round has closed, but hope it might be helpful anyway): I think you could give your copy on the inside a little more breathing room -- maybe remove the lines on the sides and the light blue and dark boxes, and just let the copy be open on the page. On the cover, I would make the 'license tag' a bit larger, so you can see the copy, and maybe even make the date numbers, so it reads like a license tag :) You have a great piece, and I hope you find the feedback on Minted to be positive and constructive as I have. It's been a great experience for me. :) Good luck!

Carol Fazio on Feb 12, 2013 at 1:34pm
Carol Fazio
  • Minted Jun 23, 2011
  • 39 Awards
  • 6411 Comments made
  • 26393 Votes cast

I agree with the great advice that snickerdoodles gave you and just want to add that whenever you have a decorative font like the one you're using for the just born and lucas, I would use a simpler font like a sans serif in a slightly different weight [something to play with] to counter it. You want the decorative font to stand out not compete with the other type. I'd also try eliminating some of the heavy black rules around your photo box and type box. They feel like they are pulling me away instead of into your piece. Good luck and hope this helps!

Kim Dietrich Elam on Feb 12, 2013 at 2:41pm
Kim Dietrich Elam
  • Minted Feb 10, 2011
  • 58 Awards
  • 9392 Comments made
  • 37383 Votes cast

Welcome to Minted, Marnie! Those cans and strings are the cutest! Clever idea. I agree with Lori and Carol's great comments and advice. I have learned so much from the community here. It's a great place to experiment with new ideas and techniques and get helpful feedback. Best of luck to you!