greeting card - Wine nap and repeat

Tags: greeting card, wine, sleep, nap, birthday, milestone, 21st, special occasion, Jennifer Teasley

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sprinkledwithcolor
  • Minted Nov 19, 2014
  • 2 Comments made
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comments from Emily:

Special occasion card to mark a milestone depicting wine.

card copy (front):

Wine. Nap. Wine. Repeat...

card copy (inside):

Maybe adulting isn't so bad after all.

tags:

greeting card, wine, sleep, nap, birthday, milestone, 21st, special occasion, Jennifer Teasley

colors shown:

pink, black, brown, red

fonts:

Kirvy

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Apr 15 2017

average score:

2.76

comments:

9

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greeting card - Wine nap and repeat by sprinkledwithcolor

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sprinkledwithcolor on Apr 16, 2017 at 10:20am
sprinkledwithcolor
  • Minted Nov 19, 2014
  • 2 Comments made
  • 2943 Votes cast

Should I take out the punctuation and just have the words by itself?

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Emma Ballou on Apr 17, 2017 at 8:43am
Emma Ballou
  • Minted Jan 26, 2016
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I like it with the punctuation - it adds finality to each action. Very clever :)

Avian by Design on Apr 18, 2017 at 7:58pm
Avian by Design
  • Minted Jan 25, 2017
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I think the punctuation is great on the outside, but I think I'd remove the period on the inside. Nice clean design :)

McKenna Pahl on Apr 21, 2017 at 7:26pm
McKenna Pahl
  • Minted Apr 16, 2017
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I think keeping the period on the inside keeps the card consistent and I like them on the front. The illustrations are nice and I like how simple the card is.

Tanya on Apr 23, 2017 at 11:28pm

On the cover, just the words, no punctuation.

Lily Wu on Apr 30, 2017 at 1:20pm
Lily Wu
  • Minted Oct 21, 2016
  • 22 Comments made
  • 247 Votes cast

I think the punctuation works here. Cute card!

GoldenDreams Studio on May 3, 2017 at 10:28pm
GoldenDreams Studio
  • Minted Dec 29, 2016
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Love the cute mask. I do feel like you can take out punctuation and the design will work-the punctuation seems slightly distracting to me. The format of the words already cause the reader to pause a bit and it will seem a little more fluid. I think leaving the period on the inside works just fine.

Jordyn Alison Designs on May 4, 2017 at 9:32pm
Jordyn Alison Designs
  • Minted Mar 13, 2015
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If you choose to keep the punctuation, the only thing that I see is that the kerning between the p and the period looks further apart then the other lines (also next to the t before the three periods). The illustrations are great though!

Monette Pangan on May 5, 2017 at 10:40am
Monette Pangan
  • Minted Jan 27, 2017
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  • 254 Votes cast

This is so cute! The punctuations on the card front aren't necessary. The words will look great on their own.