greeting card - Happy Mother's Day

Tags: greeting card, Mother, daughter, son, beautiful relationship, best relation

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Nitika Trichal
  • Minted Feb 11, 2015
  • 9 Comments made
  • 2 Votes cast

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comments from Nitika:

This card shows the beginning of motherhood and child in the womb is thanking her mom for all the love.

card copy (front):

Happy Mother's Day, Mom, I Love You

card copy (inside):

Thank you for all that love

tags:

greeting card, Mother, daughter, son, beautiful relationship, best relation

colors shown:

Pink & Red

fonts:

Critical Mass LDR

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Apr 14 2017

average score:

1.83

comments:

10

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greeting card - Happy Mother's Day by Nitika Trichal

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Nitika Trichal on Apr 14, 2017 at 4:25am
Nitika Trichal
  • Minted Feb 11, 2015
  • 9 Comments made
  • 2 Votes cast

I would love to hear your comments

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Champagne Paper Co. on Apr 14, 2017 at 6:57am
Champagne Paper Co.
  • Minted Jan 31, 2017
  • 53 Comments made
  • 5365 Votes cast

My only comment is that is feels like it's intended for an expecting mother, maybe from her husband? If it's meant to be for mom from one of her children, I'm not sure the pregnant woman makes as much sense.

Avian by Design on Apr 18, 2017 at 7:02pm
Avian by Design
  • Minted Jan 25, 2017
  • 80 Comments made
  • 587 Votes cast

It feels just a little busy to me. It's a design full of great ideas and fun designs, but it feels like there are several competing for my attention.

chelsey on Apr 21, 2017 at 11:53am

There are elements that I like, but it doesn't have an identity. Is it a bold Valentine's Day card? Is it a soft floral Mother's Day card? Is it for expecting moms?

McKenna Pahl on Apr 21, 2017 at 7:22pm
McKenna Pahl
  • Minted Apr 16, 2017
  • 2 Awards
  • 38 Comments made
  • 802 Votes cast

I agree that it is a bit busy. Maybe move the "Happy Mother's Day" to be at the top of the wreath instead of "Mom" and center the image?

Lily Wu on Apr 30, 2017 at 1:19pm
Lily Wu
  • Minted Oct 21, 2016
  • 22 Comments made
  • 247 Votes cast

I love this card, but the dress is a little lost in the background. Maybe change up the colors a little?

GoldenDreams Studio on May 3, 2017 at 10:43pm
GoldenDreams Studio
  • Minted Dec 29, 2016
  • 46 Comments made
  • 3499 Votes cast

I agree that this is a tad too busy-I like a fun busy look but I think there may be a problem with so many colors and patterns. I could suggest making her dress that pastel green of the flowers or maybe make the background white. I feel like you can lose the hearts and enlarge the front copy.

Jordyn Alison Designs on May 4, 2017 at 9:30pm
Jordyn Alison Designs
  • Minted Mar 13, 2015
  • 48 Comments made
  • 7063 Votes cast

I would try keeping the background a plain color, and then keeping the inside elements either just as text or have only one banner.

elen gaion on May 7, 2017 at 3:31am
elen gaion
  • Minted Nov 26, 2015
  • 17 Comments made
  • 33 Votes cast

Nitika, I think your design is very sweet. It's very "girlish", like a drawing from a young daughter. Not minimalist. I would say that you had a specific personality that would deliver this cart to her mom. It has personality. Yes, i agree it's busy. Kids expression!!! I would actually change the words from inside to be more child like to match the front.

elen gaion on May 7, 2017 at 3:31am
elen gaion
  • Minted Nov 26, 2015
  • 17 Comments made
  • 33 Votes cast

Nitika, I think your design is very sweet. It's very "girlish", like a drawing from a young daughter. Not minimalist. I would say that you had a specific personality that would deliver this cart to her mom. It has personality. Yes, i agree it's busy. Kids expression!!! I would actually change the words from inside to be more child like to match the front.