greeting card - Even when ...

Tags: greeting card, wedding, anniversary, love, partner, forever, through thick and thin

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Danielle Ellan
  • Minted Jul 28, 2016
  • 126 Comments made
  • 632 Votes cast

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Sometimes it's hard to put into words how you feel about someone.

tags:

greeting card, wedding, anniversary, love, partner, forever, through thick and thin

colors shown:

black, white

fonts:

arial

design inspired by:

Valentine

submitted on:

Mar 20 2017

Edited on:

Mar 31 2017

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greeting card - Even when ... by Danielle Ellan

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Danielle Ellan on Mar 20, 2017 at 12:49pm
Danielle Ellan
  • Minted Jul 28, 2016
  • 126 Comments made
  • 632 Votes cast

you are or you're? Which one is more personable?

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Jo Wiggins on Mar 23, 2017 at 12:51pm
Jo Wiggins
  • Minted Jan 18, 2015
  • 10 Comments made
  • 1942 Votes cast

I prefer "you're" - "you are" seems to disrupt the rhythm of the text in my opinion

Courtney Crane on Mar 24, 2017 at 5:43pm
Courtney Crane
  • Minted Dec 12, 2014
  • 11 Awards
  • 2724 Comments made
  • 50702 Votes cast

I prefer you're and agree with Jo. ;)

Moxie on Mar 25, 2017 at 4:42pm
Moxie
  • Minted Jan 25, 2017
  • 31 Comments made
  • 3846 Votes cast

I agree. My opinion is that "you're" feels more natural. When I'm looking for a greeting card, I gravitate towards the ones that feel more authentic.

Lee Martin on Mar 27, 2017 at 12:47am
Lee Martin
  • Minted Mar 19, 2017
  • 1 Comment made
  • 4 Votes cast

'You're' sounds so much more natural

Sonya on Mar 29, 2017 at 10:04am

I like "you are" but I'd remove the redundant "Even when" on the inside list items. Cute idea.

Melissa Kircher on Mar 30, 2017 at 8:05am
Melissa Kircher
  • Minted Feb 1, 2017
  • 17 Comments made
  • 656 Votes cast

Remove all the "even when" on the inside except for the last one. Poetic ending!

Elky Ink on Mar 30, 2017 at 12:44pm
Elky Ink
  • Minted Oct 30, 2016
  • 4 Awards
  • 1276 Comments made
  • 28560 Votes cast

Ditto, Melissa and Sonya