birthday party invitations - Pretty Spring Flowers

Tags: birthday party invitations, Floral, Flower Wreath, Hand Drawn, Script

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Kate Dorsey
  • Minted Mar 10, 2017
  • 11 Comments made
  • 4 Votes cast

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A pretty, delicate, hand-drawn floral wreath surrounds your sweet baby girl's name and age in a script font.

tags:

birthday party invitations, Floral, Flower Wreath, Hand Drawn, Script

colors shown:

Coral, Purple, Yellow, Red, Navy

fonts:

Shoreline Script, Cera

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Mar 10 2017

Edited on:

Mar 15 2017

average score:

2.05

comments:

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Kate Dorsey on Mar 10, 2017 at 5:59pm
Kate Dorsey
  • Minted Mar 10, 2017
  • 11 Comments made
  • 4 Votes cast

Thinking I should make the colors flow better in the "come celebrate" text - any thoughts?

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erin o johnson on Mar 10, 2017 at 6:23pm
erin o johnson
  • Minted Jan 7, 2017
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I would suggest a thinner black line in your artwork. The location line is hard to read-I would use a different handwritten font. Bump "11" to the left -it looks too far from month. center time below it and place a vertical line of 3 different colored dots on each side to frame the date and time lines

Angela Garrick on Mar 11, 2017 at 9:17pm
Angela Garrick
  • Minted Jun 28, 2015
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I agree i think the come celebrate text should be in one color so it doesnt take away from your floral wreath. I really like your wreath, and the font choice inside it. But i think your party details fonts and layout could be played with a bit more. The more I look at the design thore more Id like to see a version with just a plain white background so your florals are the star of the show. You could always use a die cut card to give it a shape for added interest.

Debb W on Mar 14, 2017 at 8:28pm
Debb W
  • Minted Jul 14, 2011
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Hi Kate, I agree with Angela. The wreath is really cute so if you have time maybe play with the typography. :)

Avian by Design on Mar 15, 2017 at 2:51pm
Avian by Design
  • Minted Jan 25, 2017
  • 80 Comments made
  • 587 Votes cast

Such a cute design--simple, but sweet :) I agree with previous comments about making "come celebrate" a single color. I would make all the other details of the party (time, place, date) in the same font, rather that having 'at the missouri botanical gardens" in the wreath font--I think it's a bit distracting. Perhaps play a bit with size and spacing of the party details as well.