birthday party invitations - Woodland Friends!

Tags: birthday party invitations, woodland, animals, deer, bunny, birds

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Kate Dorsey
  • Minted Mar 10, 2017
  • 11 Comments made
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Cute, hand-drawn woodland animal friends invite your friends to celebrate your little one's birthday!

tags:

birthday party invitations, woodland, animals, deer, bunny, birds

colors shown:

Blue, Brown, Green

fonts:

Moon Flower

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Mar 10 2017

average score:

2.04

comments:

11

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birthday party invitations - Woodland Friends! by Kate Dorsey

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Kate Dorsey on Mar 15, 2017 at 7:46pm
Kate Dorsey
  • Minted Mar 10, 2017
  • 11 Comments made
  • 4 Votes cast

Not so sure about the arrows, thoughts? Thanks in advance!

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erin o johnson on Mar 16, 2017 at 7:08am
erin o johnson
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Are you referring to the arrow border or arrow signs? May I suggest moving each sign a little more to the center but not completely centered? And remove the black outline around the clouds to soften a bit so it doesn't compete with your characters. I might even play with adding 2 more clouds bleeding off each side of card around the signs(if you center each arrow sign more as suggested above).

Elisabeth Behnke on Mar 17, 2017 at 2:23pm
Elisabeth Behnke
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Cute, but I think you can leave the yellow arrows out of it, and maybe brighten the whole illustration up a bit. It's pretty dark for a kid's birthday party.

Lindsey Addison on Mar 21, 2017 at 2:13pm
Lindsey Addison
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I love the arrows! If anything I might add a little embellishment to them to make it seem more nature-like. Maybe have a short branch growing off of one or add some floral/leaf detail to them. Sweet invitation!

Joanna Griffin on Mar 22, 2017 at 12:06pm
Joanna Griffin
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Super cute illustrations! I would try removing the "Hi Friends" and making the child's name front and center instead. Also maybe consider removing the arrows and rearranging the clouds slightly to fill that negative space.

LARA NASCIMENTO on Mar 23, 2017 at 7:29am
LARA NASCIMENTO
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Really beautiful. I would do the same as Joanna...change Hi Friends to the name.

Kelly Kirkbride on Mar 24, 2017 at 8:15am
Kelly Kirkbride
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That deer is adorable! I'd like to see this design without the arrows and use the tree branch and clouds to add shape to the design instead. I'd also try lightening the sign color behind the text to add more contrast. At first I was going to say to change the text to white but it's more authentic in brown to look like it's engraved in the wood.

Jillanne Chimento on Mar 27, 2017 at 1:55pm
Jillanne Chimento
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Love the concept and illustrations... I might some different colors- perhaps lighter pastels?

Hazenne Taplac on Mar 28, 2017 at 3:02pm
Hazenne Taplac
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The arrows are covered by the branch. It would look fine if the arrows are not added. Cute illustration, though! Maybe use pastel colors to make the texts (especially inside the wood) legible

Elizabeth Atlas on Mar 29, 2017 at 8:28am
Elizabeth Atlas
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Very cute! My only suggestion would be to move the whole lower illustration up slightly so there is more grass showing. The bunny looks too close to the bottom edge.

Stellax Creative on Mar 29, 2017 at 12:52pm
Stellax Creative
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I don't think you need the arrows and I would move the bunny up, like Elizabeth suggested :)