baby shower invitations - sunshine shower

Tags: baby shower invitations, baby, shower, couples, watercolor,cheery,happy

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a simple colorful watercolor couples shower invite featuring a sunshine shower...

tags:

baby shower invitations, baby, shower, couples, watercolor,cheery,happy

colors shown:

yellow, pink

fonts:

mountain retreat, argentenian nights

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 09 2017

Edited on:

Mar 01 2017

average score:

2.12

comments:

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jeanne smith on Feb 9, 2017 at 6:14am
jeanne smith
  • Minted Nov 11, 2012
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...any feedback welcome.....:)

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Champagne Paper Co. on Feb 9, 2017 at 8:27am
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The yellow hashes on the top left seem bright. Maybe play with adding some variance in transparency to those so they are more in line visually with the saturation on the other two watercolor marks?

Elky Ink on Feb 9, 2017 at 9:35pm
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I love the design and colors! Only thing is the word 'shower' seems a little to close to 'baby.'

Lauren Gerig on Feb 11, 2017 at 5:48pm
Lauren Gerig
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I would suggest experimenting with a very simple sans serif font where you currently have the tall, skinny handwritten font. I think it would clean up the look a bit, but just play around with it. :) Love the colors!

Lauren M Design on Feb 12, 2017 at 7:47pm
Lauren M Design
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I agree with Linda that "shower" does seem a little close to "baby". Are the yellow hashes representing rain? If so, perhaps a light blue or aqua shade might better represent that. Or if they are representing flowers or sunshine, maybe a shade of orange? Otherwise, I think what Champagne Paper Co. said about playing with the transparency would work well too. Good luck! :)

Vivian Design on Feb 16, 2017 at 3:29pm
Vivian Design
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Love the colors and the Argentina nights font!! just wondering how it would look like if you change the mountain retreat font and maybe the space between the lines. Stunning design anyway :) Good luck!

Laurel Twist on Feb 16, 2017 at 7:46pm
Laurel Twist
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At first glance, I think the text might lock together better if the "S" in shower falls between the "B" and "a" in baby so that it is more centered. Fun concept!

Pixel and Hank on Feb 17, 2017 at 11:44am
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The background is super cool! Have you thought about simplifying your font choices for the body text? This would allow the "couples baby shower' and the names to really pop!

Pam Ansted Uller on Feb 18, 2017 at 7:51am
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Pretty! I would simplify the fonts as the script is harder to read when it's smaller. Also I'd like to see this in another background color option. Is there any possibility of tweaking the background colors? I would like to see this version with some blues and greens. Maybe make a boy vs girl version using color?

Kelsey Mucci on Feb 24, 2017 at 3:31pm
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I really like the color combo you chose. Also, I agree with the last comment that the fonts could be simplified.

Laurel Twist on Feb 28, 2017 at 8:54am
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I think that the alignment of the "couples baby shower" type could be played with a little bit and possibly avoid using the script for the smaller type due to legibility issues. Love the use of bright color!