baby shower invitations - Expecting Something Lovely

Tags: baby shower invitations, Stork, illustration, wreath, bird, leafy, leaves

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Coley Kuyper
  • Minted Nov 16, 2015
  • 10 Comments made
  • 826 Votes cast

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This baby shower invitation features hand lettered elements and a sweetly illustrated Stork to bring a whimsical touch to your special day.

tags:

baby shower invitations, Stork, illustration, wreath, bird, leafy, leaves

colors shown:

Cream, gray, tan, yellow

fonts:

Archer, Avenir Next Condensed

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 19 2017

Edited on:

Feb 28 2017

average score:

2.51

comments:

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baby shower invitations - Expecting Something Lovely by Coley Kuyper

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Coley Kuyper on Feb 19, 2017 at 4:45pm
Coley Kuyper
  • Minted Nov 16, 2015
  • 10 Comments made
  • 826 Votes cast

Do the fonts look good together? Any other feedback is welcome! Thanks!

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Laurel Twist on Feb 20, 2017 at 7:30am
Laurel Twist
  • Minted Feb 16, 2017
  • 15 Comments made
  • 335 Votes cast

I think all the fonts are great aside from avenir next condensed. I think a non condensed version might actually work better, or even just a thinner font for those sections instead. Love the illustration!

Amy Lee Creel on Feb 21, 2017 at 10:36am
Amy Lee Creel
  • Minted Feb 17, 2017
  • 1 Award
  • 104 Comments made
  • 5124 Votes cast

I think it's just precious. I like your font choices. Try not italicizing the registry info. Just keep it small, but same font as "join us..." PS: with that address choice, you must be a gilmore girls fan :)

Paula Pecevich on Feb 21, 2017 at 12:05pm
Paula Pecevich
  • Minted Sep 13, 2016
  • 13 Awards
  • 347 Comments made
  • 11914 Votes cast

I'm actually thinking that Archer could be different. Even though you have APRIL 8th, 3 pm and the phone number the same size and aligned your eye (or at least my eye) makes it look like APRIL 8th is a little higher than the rest of the line. Maybe if you capped PM. It's because some of the numbers descend. Also I see how you have some all lower case and some all upper case. Wonder what it would look like if you have all lower case and just keep her name all in caps and maybe a few points larger? You could make "join us..." a spec smaller. Such a cute illustration you did!

Kanika Mathur on Feb 22, 2017 at 9:22pm
Kanika Mathur
  • Minted Jan 15, 2014
  • 33 Awards
  • 1995 Comments made
  • 10182 Votes cast

The illustration is lovely! You could use more tracking in all the text in the lower half. Also last line doesn't have to be italicized.

Chloe-Belle Porter on Feb 25, 2017 at 10:24am
Chloe-Belle Porter
  • Minted Nov 17, 2012
  • 10 Comments made
  • 557 Votes cast

What a stunning illustration! I'm so impressed. I agree with the tracking on the lower half, other than that I think its adorable.