baby shower invitations - SIP & SEE, BABY!

Tags: baby shower invitations, parisian, sip and see, baby shower, cheers, baby, fashionista

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  • Minted Jan 27, 2017
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comments from Meagan:

Invite your best gal pals to see your new addition with this Parisian inspired illustration featuring quirky silly straw text. CHEERS BABY!

tags:

baby shower invitations, parisian, sip and see, baby shower, cheers, baby, fashionist a

colors shown:

pink, orange, black, white, red

fonts:

Arial, MrsEaves Italic, Blooming elegant

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 17 2017

Edited on:

Feb 27 2017

average score:

2.73

comments:

2

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baby shower invitations - SIP & SEE, BABY! by Novel Paper

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Susan Brown on Mar 8, 2017 at 1:30pm
Susan Brown
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So fresh. Nice job.

Dawn Jasper on Apr 14, 2017 at 3:55pm
Dawn Jasper
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Woo!! Congrats on your first pick! I'm sure there's many more of those to come :) So excited for you!

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Rae Kaiser on Feb 21, 2017 at 10:58am
Rae Kaiser
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So cute. Love the illustration!

Novel Paper on Feb 21, 2017 at 11:52am
Novel Paper
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@Rae thanks!

2birdstone on Feb 21, 2017 at 3:27pm
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So clever and adult feeling, I love that it doesn't scream "baby" to me.

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Dawn Jasper on Feb 18, 2017 at 5:52pm
Dawn Jasper
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I do still like a but that how is pulling focus a bit awkwardly. You could move the contents up a bit closer to the script line and have just the bow (I don't think you need the lines) under the rsvp line and you could add a line about registry info. Just a thought. Go with what you like :)

Novel Paper on Feb 19, 2017 at 5:44am
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@Dawn I always fall in love with the one that ends up not being selected in my poll. Ha ha! I might play with some of your suggestions since I too love the pattern and whim of opt A. Thanks so much for your input!

Dawn Jasper on Feb 19, 2017 at 5:51am
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Polls are just a general idea. I say always go with your gut and stay true to yourself as a designer :) I'll usually make a poll if I haven't fallen in love with one yet lol.

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Dawn Jasper on Feb 17, 2017 at 11:07am
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B!!!! So modern and fun and the type is perfect!

Angela Garrick on Feb 17, 2017 at 1:38pm
Angela Garrick
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Such a fun design! I voted c.

Novel Paper on Feb 17, 2017 at 1:57pm
Novel Paper
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Thanks yall! I'm so happy to get the feedback. Hopefully I will have the final final soon :)

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Lea Delaveris on Feb 17, 2017 at 7:45am
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That illo is adorable!! Have you tried it as a vertical layout instead of horizontal? I'm wondering if that will give more emphasis to the sip and see straws. I think the black bar may be pulling focus away from that illo too. You could probably do with out that.

Laurel Twist on Feb 17, 2017 at 8:36am
Laurel Twist
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Adorable, creative concept! Have you looked at any real silly straws that make up words to see how they're shaped in real life? That might help. But I think what you have is REALLY close. Maybe just the S in see and the then curling up the tail of the E in see as well.

Dawn Jasper on Feb 17, 2017 at 10:27am
Dawn Jasper
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Love your illustration! I agree with lea about the black bar. Maybe try it in the yellow from the straw and extend it all the way down? Or maybe it doesn't even need a bar?