baby shower invitations - Bragging Rights

Tags: baby shower invitations, gender reveal, couples shower, bragging rights, bring your guess, baby boy, baby girl, baby shower

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Avian by Design
  • Minted Jan 25, 2017
  • 80 Comments made
  • 587 Votes cast

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This light-hearted gender-reveal party announcement invites your guests to come with a guess and prove their clairvoyance!

tags:

baby shower invitations, gender reveal, couples shower, bragging rights, bring your guess, baby boy, baby girl, baby shower

colors shown:

coral, blue, silver, white

fonts:

Gills Sans MT Condensed, Modern No. 20

design inspired by:

Foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 10 2017

Edited on:

Feb 21 2017

average score:

2.39

comments:

0

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Avian by Design on Feb 10, 2017 at 4:20pm
Avian by Design
  • Minted Jan 25, 2017
  • 80 Comments made
  • 587 Votes cast

which looks less crowded--the one with the white ring of text, or the one with the light ring of text?

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Shannon on Feb 17, 2017 at 10:34am
Shannon
  • Minted May 20, 2013
  • 19 Awards
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I went with A because I like the scale of the lower copy better. This is just perfectly quirky!

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Angela Garrick on Feb 11, 2017 at 8:54am
Angela Garrick
  • Minted Jun 28, 2015
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love the concept and such a great illustration in the center! I think for me it does feel a bit crowded. Maybe take out the white ring of text to give yourself some more room to play with placement of the party info. You could also then give a bit more breathing room between the babies face and check boxes.

Dawn Jasper on Feb 11, 2017 at 6:57pm
Dawn Jasper
  • Minted Jan 16, 2010
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This is a great idea! And I love your illustration - it feels almost vintage. I agree that the white band could go - the words are fun but maybe you could make a cool backer pattern with them instead? I"m also wondering if it would work to flip it so the background is white but everything else is in the split colors? Or maybe that would be too hard for customization? Maybe the colors could just be a tiny bit softer?

Novel Paper on Feb 14, 2017 at 12:50pm
Novel Paper
  • Minted Jan 27, 2017
  • 5 Awards
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  • 2401 Votes cast

I love the call to action of this piece! The text feels small and crowded in some spots. You could try increasing the kern, maybe bump up the size and let the text create the ring instead of having an actual white ring. Also, the tiny bit of foil on the bow and the tie is fun, but I wonder if it could use a touch more of foil somewhere?

Metro-Events on Feb 14, 2017 at 3:45pm
Metro-Events
  • Minted Nov 18, 2016
  • 1 Award
  • 8 Comments made
  • 63 Votes cast

I think it's cute, the split is perfect for the faces, the color combo is modern. The only thing that I am not sure of are the outer words in the white outline and the letters under March in the date. I can tell those are letters but I can't read it at all and my vision is really good.