baby shower invitations - We're Over the Moon for You!

Tags: baby shower invitations, moon, star, stripes, script, night

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Laurel Twist
  • Minted Feb 16, 2017
  • 15 Comments made
  • 335 Votes cast

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This whimsical baby shower invitation features a fun baby boy or gender neutral moon and stars theme.

tags:

baby shower invitations, moon, star, stripes, script, night

colors shown:

blue, yellow, white

fonts:

Loveletter Script, Cera Basic, Local Market Display Rough

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 16 2017

Edited on:

Feb 16 2017

average score:

2.83

comments:

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baby shower invitations - We're Over the Moon for You! by Laurel Twist

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Laurel Twist on Feb 16, 2017 at 4:29pm
Laurel Twist
  • Minted Feb 16, 2017
  • 15 Comments made
  • 335 Votes cast

Do you think the white "shadow" treatment is the best solution for the mother's name? Any other feedback welcome too! Thanks!

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Vivian Design on Feb 17, 2017 at 11:29am
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
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Hi Laurel! beautiful design :) Actually I suggest if you try some gold foil for the "over the moon" and the stars and change the color of the mother's name to that slate grey I think and get rid of the shadow. Another thing, if you change the font used in march 19 and 11am-1pm to create a balanced look with the rest of the text. Good luck!

Pixel and Hank on Feb 17, 2017 at 11:30am
Pixel and Hank
  • Minted Dec 10, 2010
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Super cute! The white certainly helps the name pop! I think some of your fonts might be competing with each other. Have you tried using a less decorated for for "Let's Shower'?

Korry Brown on Feb 17, 2017 at 2:52pm
Korry Brown
  • Minted Dec 10, 2014
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Really cute design. While I do think the white helps pop the Mom's name, I think there's probably other solutions that might work too. Lightning the background and the moon to a more pastel might give your Mom's name the contrast it needs. Or perhaps trying another color? Like a navy? Just another thought. Really cute!

Lauren M Design on Feb 19, 2017 at 4:47pm
Lauren M Design
  • Minted Feb 5, 2015
  • 29 Comments made
  • 1700 Votes cast

Very cute! What about changing the mom's name to the gray used in the other text and just keeping the yellow for the stars? I like the white shadow as it creates some depth... maybe you can use that on "Over the Moon" as well? (Although you might need to make "the" the same font as "over" and "moon".) Just some ideas. Good luck!

Jean Calomeni on Feb 20, 2017 at 10:48am
Jean Calomeni
  • Minted Dec 2, 2016
  • 136 Comments made
  • 7644 Votes cast

I don't think the white shadow is needed for the mom's name. I think this design is absolutely lovely! I really like this color palette. As a guideline, try to keep your number of fonts to two. The script and the sans serif are great together. Watch your kerning - I'd move the first "o" of moon just a bit closer to the "M"

Avian by Design on Feb 21, 2017 at 1:59pm
Avian by Design
  • Minted Jan 25, 2017
  • 80 Comments made
  • 587 Votes cast

This is such a cute design, and very easy to "navigate"! I like the white shadow on the mother's name, but I think her name would actually stand out more in gray, rather than yellow.

Angela Garrick on Feb 23, 2017 at 12:30pm
Angela Garrick
  • Minted Jun 28, 2015
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I really like your moon and stars and think the font choice for over the moon works well. I was wondering what it would look like if you moved "lets shower... stephanie ann" down to replace "please join us for a brunch and bubbly." then centered " over the moon" over the moon.

Chloe-Belle Porter on Feb 25, 2017 at 10:22am
Chloe-Belle Porter
  • Minted Nov 17, 2012
  • 10 Comments made
  • 557 Votes cast

I love the color combo! I agree with the mama's name - perhaps removing the shadow altogether might make it stand out a touch more? I really like this one, it totally gives me a mid-century vibe which is quite unique.

Aspa Gika on Feb 28, 2017 at 8:47am
Aspa Gika
  • Minted Mar 16, 2015
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  • 9588 Votes cast

Hi Laurel, this is a super cute design! I agree with Vivian, "Over the Moon" will look very nice in gold foil and you can use the slate grey for the mother's name.

Julee London on Feb 28, 2017 at 6:09pm
Julee London
  • Minted Dec 7, 2014
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  • 10515 Votes cast

Cute! The "please join us" and times are a little hard to read in that font. It works elsewhere...