baby shower invitations - Baby

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Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

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This watercolor inspired design is dedicated for people who prefer a dreamy delicate touch.

tags:

baby shower invitations, watercolor, baby, baby shower, invitation, design

colors shown:

purple, white

fonts:

Poor Richard, Quentin

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 15 2017

average score:

1.74

comments:

6

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Vivian Design on Feb 15, 2017 at 2:05pm
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

Any feedback is appreciated :)

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Pam Ansted Uller on Feb 18, 2017 at 8:19am
Pam Ansted Uller
  • Minted Dec 6, 2015
  • 33 Comments made
  • 1916 Votes cast

This is very pretty. Love the background colors. I would only make the punctuation consistent and not lower case, East Bridge Road, R.S.V.P. and Target.

Vivian Design on Feb 18, 2017 at 10:16am
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

Hey there Pam! Thank you so much for your feedback!

Korry Brown on Feb 18, 2017 at 5:50pm
Korry Brown
  • Minted Dec 10, 2014
  • 7 Awards
  • 358 Comments made
  • 16710 Votes cast

Love the background! The size of the details at the bottom feels out of scale to the rest of the invite. I might try to go smaller, and decrease the leading between lines. Perhaps make the name stand out more? Just a thought! Very nice :)

Avian by Design on Feb 21, 2017 at 1:57pm
Avian by Design
  • Minted Jan 25, 2017
  • 80 Comments made
  • 587 Votes cast

It feels a bit like the design is a little bottom heavy--the majority of the design elements appear at the bottom 2/3rds of the page. I understand the appeal of having "Baby Shower" in the center--perhaps you can decrease the copy size, to reduce the weight at the bottom of the page.

Rebecca Daublin on Feb 25, 2017 at 11:20am
Rebecca Daublin
  • Minted May 13, 2011
  • 38 Awards
  • 244 Comments made
  • 10779 Votes cast

That background is gorgeous, and I love the script font too. I think a thicker sans serif font with extra leading and tracking (in the same general layout) would look more modern and go well with the overall feel.