baby shower invitations - Oh Baby Boy!

Tags: baby shower invitations, baby, boy, minimalist, simple, modern, neutral, baby shower, invitation

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Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 101 Comments made
  • 781 Votes cast

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Another minimalist baby shower design for parents to be who prefer to keep it as simple as possible!

tags:

baby shower invitations, baby, boy, minimalist, simple, modern, neutral, baby shower, invitation

colors shown:

white, Dark blue, copper

fonts:

Arty signature, Courier New

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 15 2017

average score:

1.89

comments:

9

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Vivian Design on Feb 15, 2017 at 2:36pm
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 101 Comments made
  • 781 Votes cast

Any thoughts?

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Kampai Designs on Feb 15, 2017 at 3:37pm
Kampai Designs
  • Minted Feb 25, 2012
  • 83 Awards
  • 1477 Comments made
  • 28913 Votes cast

I like the 'Oh Boy' but I think you should reconsider the Courier New font or at least rework it. I would reduce size significantly, keep the name the same size and increase the tracking quite a bit. There is also something weird going on with the address as parts of it are in lower case and there is a full stop in the middle.

Jean Calomeni on Feb 16, 2017 at 7:27am
Jean Calomeni
  • Minted Dec 2, 2016
  • 136 Comments made
  • 7644 Votes cast

Just a little tweak to "Boy" and I think you've got it. I would NOT reduce the size of it and I really like the font. I love it. I don't think the typewriter font works. Pick a modern sans serif.

Vivian Design on Feb 16, 2017 at 2:12pm
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 101 Comments made
  • 781 Votes cast

Thank you so much Kampai! Yes, looking at it over and over again, I knew there is something weird! I will try a new "hierarchy" and see. Good luck with your entries :)

Vivian Design on Feb 16, 2017 at 2:17pm
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 101 Comments made
  • 781 Votes cast

Thanks a lot Jean! I will consider that :) I'm not satisfied about the courier new either. Wish you all the best with your entries :)

Laurel Twist on Feb 16, 2017 at 4:27pm
Laurel Twist
  • Minted Feb 16, 2017
  • 15 Comments made
  • 335 Votes cast

I love the simplicity of this concept. I do think that it could benefit from a more legible font for the "Oh Boy" as well as the body copy. Additionally, right justified text tends to be pretty hard to read, maybe consider left justifying instead.

Pixel and Hank on Feb 17, 2017 at 11:35am
Pixel and Hank
  • Minted Dec 10, 2010
  • 63 Awards
  • 752 Comments made
  • 14670 Votes cast

Love the simplicity of this! I think your body copy could be a touch more readable.

Pam Ansted Uller on Feb 18, 2017 at 8:15am
Pam Ansted Uller
  • Minted Dec 6, 2015
  • 33 Comments made
  • 1916 Votes cast

I like this design. I like the "Oh Boy" script. It is just a touch hard to read but I knew what it was. I would make the type font in the body copy a different type font and use upper and lower case as right now it's not consistent. Is the name the name of the baby? I would probably add the middle name too.

Mariko Iwata on Feb 26, 2017 at 1:15am
Mariko Iwata
  • Minted Jan 27, 2017
  • 7 Comments made

I agree, I love the simplicity of "oh boy" and having a more simplified bottom area would compliment it very well