baby shower invitations - Mommy To Be!

Tags: baby shower invitations, baby shower, mother, mommy, mom, flowers, silver, foil-pressed, invitation

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Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 103 Comments made
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Some flowers blended with some shiny foil for Future Mommy To Be...

tags:

baby shower invitations, baby shower, mother, mommy, mom, flowers, silver, foil-pressed, invitation

colors shown:

silver, light pink

fonts:

Wild youth, Courier New

design inspired by:

Foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 15 2017

average score:

2.05

comments:

9

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Vivian Design on Feb 15, 2017 at 2:07pm
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 103 Comments made
  • 827 Votes cast

Any feedback is welcome :) Should I change anything?

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Rega on Feb 15, 2017 at 4:51pm
Rega
  • Minted May 8, 2016
  • 4 Awards
  • 1457 Comments made
  • 10707 Votes cast

Beautiful background :) I'm not sure the typography you use should be upper case letters and a bit small,so you have more space between the lines ? It would be more consistent and balance :)

Angela Garrick on Feb 15, 2017 at 5:17pm
Angela Garrick
  • Minted Jun 28, 2015
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great floral background, love the colors. Im kind of curious what a version would look like without the silver vines.

Jean Calomeni on Feb 16, 2017 at 7:24am
Jean Calomeni
  • Minted Dec 2, 2016
  • 136 Comments made
  • 7644 Votes cast

The mom's name is hard to read. It could be larger and don't leave so much space between the lines there. Beautiful design. One thing that a lot of people do here is try to fill a space with the available type. The goal is to chunk information so that it looks like it's not floating in space.

Vivian Design on Feb 16, 2017 at 2:22pm
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 103 Comments made
  • 827 Votes cast

Thank you so much Ladies!! :)

Linda Nagy on Feb 16, 2017 at 3:53pm
Linda Nagy
  • Minted Feb 15, 2017
  • 16 Comments made
  • 37 Votes cast

I'm not sure about the font you're using. This floral background is so pretty and sophisticated and the font is a typewriter like harsh font (callen slab serif). Try a prettier Serif font. :)

Amy Lee Creel on Feb 20, 2017 at 6:31pm
Amy Lee Creel
  • Minted Feb 17, 2017
  • 1 Award
  • 104 Comments made
  • 5124 Votes cast

I agree with Linda about the font. The typewriter font doesn't seem to flow with the beautiful backgrounds. Maybe try a different font, and try a version without either the glitter boarder, or the silver vines? Then do a poll with the 2 versions?

Avian by Design on Feb 21, 2017 at 1:54pm
Avian by Design
  • Minted Jan 25, 2017
  • 80 Comments made
  • 587 Votes cast

I think that the floral background is beautiful! Perhaps lighten up the density of the glitter border to match the soft feel of the background.

frau brandt on Mar 1, 2017 at 8:34am
frau brandt
  • Minted Sep 19, 2015
  • 12 Awards
  • 1970 Comments made
  • 8951 Votes cast

Very beautiful border. The font for the fine print could be different., maybe Mrs. Eaves.