baby shower invitations - Twinkle

Tags: baby shower invitations, shiny, foil, shine, gold, baby shower

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Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

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comments from Vivian:

This design is truly shining in foil to welcome the little one!

tags:

baby shower invitations, shiny, foil, shine, gold, baby shower

colors shown:

gold, blue

fonts:

Bromello, RNS Camelia

design inspired by:

Foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 14 2017

average score:

1.65

comments:

11

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Vivian Design on Feb 14, 2017 at 9:04am
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

any feedback is welcome! :) Is it busy? Should I change anything?

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Angela Garrick on Feb 14, 2017 at 2:47pm
Angela Garrick
  • Minted Jun 28, 2015
  • 52 Awards
  • 886 Comments made
  • 29117 Votes cast

Hello, I'd maybe play with some more font options. I think the thin type in contrast to the bold design elements gets a little lost. Also Im curious what it would look like if baby shower was in a solid color, black,dark grey or maybe sample that dark blue thats in your design?

Vivian Design on Feb 15, 2017 at 1:18pm
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

Thanks Angela!! That's what I've been thinking too; I think changing the fonts will lead to something much better! I will try that and see :) Good luck on your entries!

Elky Ink on Feb 15, 2017 at 8:29pm
Elky Ink
  • Minted Oct 30, 2016
  • 2 Awards
  • 1127 Comments made
  • 22926 Votes cast

Cute design! I agree with Angela on the font. I think the shape at the bottom is the dominant feature, which isn't your intent.

Jean Calomeni on Feb 16, 2017 at 7:17am
Jean Calomeni
  • Minted Dec 2, 2016
  • 136 Comments made
  • 7644 Votes cast

Difficult to read. Try a chunkier font for the main text and make Baby Shower larger.

Laurel Twist on Feb 16, 2017 at 2:43pm
Laurel Twist
  • Minted Feb 16, 2017
  • 15 Comments made
  • 335 Votes cast

I love the gold sparkles! My advice would be to allow more breathing room between the edges of the text and where the gold speckle border starts. I also agree with Jean about the fonts.

Vivian Design on Feb 16, 2017 at 3:03pm
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

Thank you so much Laurel :) I really appreciate your valuable advice Ladies :) I'm thinking about changing the whole text and see how it would look like

Chandler Lettin on Feb 21, 2017 at 4:29pm
Chandler Lettin
  • Minted Dec 13, 2016
  • 4 Awards
  • 23 Comments made
  • 702 Votes cast

I love the sparkles too! It might be worth trying to delete the outer border and keeping just the inner border...that way more focus will go on your text. Just a thought - nice job!

Kelsey Beaudoin on Feb 27, 2017 at 5:28am
Kelsey Beaudoin
  • Minted Feb 17, 2017
  • 10 Comments made
  • 2321 Votes cast

I like the font and glitter for baby shower :), but the font on the bottom looks a bit squished. Maybe try another font?

frau brandt on Mar 1, 2017 at 8:29am
frau brandt
  • Minted Sep 19, 2015
  • 11 Awards
  • 1547 Comments made
  • 7884 Votes cast

Nice glitter border! Maybe the background of text can be lighter to make it more readable. I like the script font for Babyshower, but the other text seems too tight. I would consider another font.

frau brandt on Mar 1, 2017 at 8:29am
frau brandt
  • Minted Sep 19, 2015
  • 11 Awards
  • 1547 Comments made
  • 7884 Votes cast

Nice glitter border! Maybe the background of text can be lighter to make it more readable. I like the script font for Babyshower, but the other text seems too tight. I would consider another font.