baby shower invitations - My little star

Tags: baby shower invitations, silver, leaves, baby shower, shiny, clean, die cut, baby

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  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

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This foil-pressed baby shower features beautiful silver leaves and a clean minimalist look. Enjoy it!

tags:

baby shower invitations, silver, leaves, baby shower, shiny, clean, die cut, baby

colors shown:

silver, black

fonts:

stonestick, Sakkal Majalla

design inspired by:

Foil-pressed

submitted on:

Feb 14 2017

average score:

1.92

comments:

9

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Vivian Design on Feb 14, 2017 at 9:05am
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

Any thoughts?

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Angela Garrick on Feb 14, 2017 at 2:42pm
Angela Garrick
  • Minted Jun 28, 2015
  • 52 Awards
  • 886 Comments made
  • 29120 Votes cast

Hello, love the branches! First impressions, I think "Baby shower" could be sized up, right now its about the same size as the line above it and with the foil its just getting lost. Maybe make the h in honor lower case to match the rest of the sentence.

Vivian Design on Feb 15, 2017 at 1:21pm
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

Hey Angela! Thank you so much! You really have a GREAT attention to details :) wish you all the best!

Elky Ink on Feb 15, 2017 at 8:26pm
Elky Ink
  • Minted Oct 30, 2016
  • 2 Awards
  • 1127 Comments made
  • 22926 Votes cast

I think it looks great. I agree with Angela on the Baby Shower size.

Jean Calomeni on Feb 16, 2017 at 7:17am
Jean Calomeni
  • Minted Dec 2, 2016
  • 136 Comments made
  • 7644 Votes cast

Yes, Baby Shower could be much larger. I'd also group text so that you don't have equal spaces between all the lines.

Laurel Twist on Feb 16, 2017 at 7:27pm
Laurel Twist
  • Minted Feb 16, 2017
  • 15 Comments made
  • 335 Votes cast

I love this classy take on a baby shower invite, and the font of the name is one of my favorites. I think overall you may want to keep the text consistent and either do all lower case or all camel case. Aside from that, I agree with Jean on grouping the text.

Hallie Fischer on Feb 16, 2017 at 7:44pm
Hallie Fischer
  • Minted Jun 28, 2015
  • 10 Awards
  • 238 Comments made
  • 14488 Votes cast

Agreed on Baby Shower should be bigger. I love the leaves and branches hanging down with the color palette.

Pam Ansted Uller on Feb 18, 2017 at 7:13am
Pam Ansted Uller
  • Minted Dec 6, 2015
  • 33 Comments made
  • 1916 Votes cast

HI there! Pretty design I like the streamlined elegant feel to it. I agree with Angela that the words Baby Shower should be a little bigger. If you don't like how it looks, then make it upper and lower case. Also, I know you were going for a style with the all lower case letters and no punctuation, but I might suggest to make a second version with the words: East Bridge Road, p.m. R.S.V.P. and Target as proper English grammar suggests.

Vivian Design on Feb 18, 2017 at 10:25am
Vivian Design
  • Minted Nov 3, 2016
  • 83 Comments made
  • 719 Votes cast

Thank you so much Ladies for taking the time to help me with your valuable opinions! Yep, I'm thinking about changing the fonts; I'm not quite satisfied about the overall look of this design. And Pam, Thank you!! I've missed that more than once as I was copying and pasting the text. Thank you all again :)