graduation announcements - Personalized Quote

Tags: graduation announcements, Personal Quote, modern, simple, minimal

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Christina Vargas
  • Minted Apr 9, 2014
  • 8 Comments made
  • 508 Votes cast

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comments from Christina:

I wanted the Grad to be able to say whatever they wanted to say their guest.

tags:

graduation announcements, Personal Quote, modern, simple, minimal

colors shown:

Black, yellow, white

fonts:

Emmascript and Avenir Next

design inspired by:

Non-foil-pressed

submitted on:

Nov 28 2016

Edited on:

Dec 07 2016

average score:

1.93

comments:

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graduation announcements - Personalized Quote by Christina Vargas

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Christina Vargas on Nov 28, 2016 at 6:58pm
Christina Vargas
  • Minted Apr 9, 2014
  • 8 Comments made
  • 508 Votes cast

A fellow mint artist made a comment about the copy under the quote being distracting. The poll is my attempt to address this issue and still maintain the light airy feeling that is created by the diagonal white space on the top left corner and the bottom right corner.

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Version 2 (poll) - submitted on Nov 28 2016 - hide

Kim Dietrich Elam on Dec 3, 2016 at 4:44pm
Kim Dietrich Elam
  • Minted Feb 10, 2011
  • 58 Awards
  • 9392 Comments made
  • 37383 Votes cast

I voted B!

Annie Montgomery on Dec 7, 2016 at 9:56am
Annie Montgomery
  • Minted May 14, 2012
  • 46 Awards
  • 1019 Comments made
  • 11441 Votes cast

I like the clean layout in A! ;)

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Kim Dietrich Elam on Nov 29, 2016 at 6:55pm
Kim Dietrich Elam
  • Minted Feb 10, 2011
  • 58 Awards
  • 9392 Comments made
  • 37383 Votes cast

Welcome to Minted, Christina! I love the editorial style of this and the white background. May I suggest moving the black text on the bottom ("the graduation..." to the right (like a quarter inch from the right edge) and increasing the font sizes? Also, I would take the info from under her name (under the quote) and move it to the bottom of the card - it's a little small where it is and detracts from the quote. Best of luck to you!

Christina Vargas on Dec 3, 2016 at 4:33pm
Christina Vargas
  • Minted Apr 9, 2014
  • 8 Comments made
  • 508 Votes cast

Hi Kim, Thank you so much for your comments!! I did what you suggested, however I feel like I lost the balance of the white space that was created by the top left side and the bottom right side. Nonetheless to address the issue of not distracting from the quote I tried a couple of other options. One option that is exactly what you asked, one that brings the copy under celebration, another that tries to blend the Avenir next copy with the Ammascript. I am going to create a poll to see what people think.