wedding invitations - Peacock Feather

Tags: wedding invitations, Peacock, colorful, artistic, wedding, simple, white background

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Pirediba Parameswaran
  • Minted Jul 17, 2012
  • 23 Comments made
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Peacock feather and Golden type design

tags:

wedding invitations, Peacock, colorful, artistic, wedding, simple, white background

colors shown:

Gold, Peacock colors, green, Blue, white

fonts:

Futura Book, Copperplate Gothic Light, CurlzMT

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Wedding Invitation

submitted on:

Sep 14 2012

Edited on:

Sep 25 2012

average score:

1.64

comments:

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wedding invitations - Peacock Feather by Pirediba Parameswaran

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Version 3 - submitted on Sep 20 2012 - hide

Kim Dietrich Elam on Sep 24, 2012 at 9:25am
Kim Dietrich Elam
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This is looking so much better, Pirediba - that feather is really becoming the focal point! I would simplify the type even more. I recommend looking at some of the wedding invitations already for sale on Minted to see what types of fonts look good together and are doing well here. Also, I would reserve that fabulous bright blue for the bride and groom's name, and make the rest of the type gold, so that the names really stand out. Keep at it, it's looking good!

Version 2 - submitted on Sep 18 2012 - hide

Anupama on Sep 18, 2012 at 1:07pm
Anupama
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this is looking much better without the border and the ring...and you get to see some white space too...

Kim Dietrich Elam on Sep 18, 2012 at 2:07pm
Kim Dietrich Elam
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It's looking better! White space is a good thing - you may want to take out "Wedding Invitation" and claim even more space (everyone will understand that it's a wedding invitation). And I would consider simplifying the type even more - I would recommend using only 1 or 2 colors and 1 or 2 fonts (maybe one for the names, and one for the rest). Hope that helps!

Version 1 - submitted on Sep 14 2012 - hide

Pirediba Parameswaran on Sep 14, 2012 at 5:03pm
Pirediba Parameswaran
  • Minted Jul 17, 2012
  • 23 Comments made
  • 733 Votes cast

Comments are more welcome.

Kim Dietrich Elam on Sep 15, 2012 at 6:00am
Kim Dietrich Elam
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That peacock feather is beautiful, Pirediba! I think you could leave off the wedding rings and the gold starbursts - they detract from your focus, the peacock feather. Also, I recommend simplifying your type - it would look more unified with less font styles and colors. Maybe use a san serif font like Futura? Best of luck to you!

Serenity Avenue on Sep 15, 2012 at 9:41am
Serenity Avenue
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Pirediba, I agree with everything Kim mentioned. Sometimes less is better than too much. I hope you enjoy your first wedding invitation challenge and keep up the work!