wedding invitations - Modern Stripe Invitation

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The Paper Proposal
  • Minted Aug 22, 2011
  • 43 Comments made
  • 989 Votes cast

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comments from Cristina:

Black and white modern strip invitation with rose gold foil accents.

tags:

wedding invitations, black and white, stripe, modern, rose gold

colors shown:

Black and White

fonts:

Doris Day and Orator

design inspired by:

Foil-pressed

submitted on:

Oct 19 2016

Edited on:

Nov 07 2016

average score:

2.24

comments:

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wedding invitations - Modern Stripe Invitation by The Paper Proposal

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The Paper Proposal on Oct 19, 2016 at 1:42pm
The Paper Proposal
  • Minted Aug 22, 2011
  • 43 Comments made
  • 989 Votes cast

I appreciate any and all feedback. Especially wondering if the gold foil addition to the stripes is too much...?

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carly reed walker on Nov 4, 2016 at 11:48am
carly reed walker
  • Minted Jan 25, 2011
  • 60 Awards
  • 1541 Comments made
  • 45434 Votes cast

I voted A, I like the foil with the black and white, but I would center the white box and the text!

Ling Wang on Nov 4, 2016 at 12:13pm
Ling Wang
  • Minted Oct 26, 2010
  • 6 Awards
  • 863 Comments made
  • 23218 Votes cast

Still sticking with the non-foil option C :) Carly brings up a good point but I wonder if you should try going to the other end of the spectrum and bring everything down to make it *more* asymmetrical. Also, in case you go with A, the stripe at the top without foil feels out of place, even though I know it's because you're foiling the top edge of the stripes and that's cut off. Not sure what to suggest as a fix for that! Just pointing it out.

Laura Hankins on Nov 5, 2016 at 1:03pm
Laura Hankins
  • Minted Aug 13, 2008
  • 173 Awards
  • 2645 Comments made
  • 9750 Votes cast

A for me- I like the touch of foil! I also like Carly's idea of centering it.

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Ling Wang on Nov 4, 2016 at 11:12am
Ling Wang
  • Minted Oct 26, 2010
  • 6 Awards
  • 863 Comments made
  • 23218 Votes cast

B: I still prefer the black background but the foil stripes make it feel too busy. Also, did you mean to round the bottom right corner on the black box?

The Paper Proposal on Nov 4, 2016 at 11:17am
The Paper Proposal
  • Minted Aug 22, 2011
  • 43 Comments made
  • 989 Votes cast

So I should get rid of the foil? My idea behind that was making it different... "stand out", but I don't want it to look too busy either...

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Patricia Wallace on Oct 21, 2016 at 6:48am
Patricia Wallace
  • Minted Jan 12, 2015
  • 1 Award
  • 11 Comments made
  • 1546 Votes cast

I love the gold foil! A is my favorite!

Rhea Jane Baricuatro on Oct 24, 2016 at 5:47am
Rhea Jane Baricuatro
  • Minted Sep 22, 2016
  • 5 Comments made

I agree with Patricia :) Option A is really great :) I love the way how the frame align with the design :)

Leah Bisch on Nov 3, 2016 at 11:39am
Leah Bisch
  • Minted Mar 4, 2014
  • 171 Awards
  • 998 Comments made
  • 5307 Votes cast

D for me! The design is so bold and modern with the black and white stripes that I think simpler is better! :)

Erika Firm on Nov 3, 2016 at 9:37pm
Erika Firm
  • Minted Apr 11, 2014
  • 93 Awards
  • 217 Comments made
  • 6960 Votes cast

I voted D. Little typo: you forgot the "request the pleasure of your company at their wedding" line ; )

The Paper Proposal on Nov 4, 2016 at 7:57am
The Paper Proposal
  • Minted Aug 22, 2011
  • 43 Comments made
  • 989 Votes cast

Good catch, Erika... thank you!

Ling Wang on Nov 4, 2016 at 8:12am
Ling Wang
  • Minted Oct 26, 2010
  • 6 Awards
  • 863 Comments made
  • 23218 Votes cast

D for me: I agree with Leah RE: simplicity. :)

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The Paper Proposal on Oct 19, 2016 at 3:33pm
The Paper Proposal
  • Minted Aug 22, 2011
  • 43 Comments made
  • 989 Votes cast

Thick or thin stripes? Foil or no foil? Any opinions are more than appreciated =)