wedding invitations - Ampersand

Tags: wedding invitations, gold-foil, art-deco, ampersand, navy, gold

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Melanie Winters
  • Minted Sep 8, 2016
  • 33 Comments made
  • 952 Votes cast

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This classic navy and gold wedding invitation uses the ampersand symbol as a focal point. Gold foil elements pair perfectly with an art-deco inspired sans serif font to create a simplified version of the 1920s invites that are all the rave.

tags:

wedding invitations, gold-foil, art-deco, ampersand, navy, gold

colors shown:

Navy, Gold

fonts:

Lamar Pen, Blakely, AdornS Engraved

design inspired by:

Foil-pressed

submitted on:

Oct 20 2016

Edited on:

Nov 03 2016

average score:

2.37

comments:

0

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wedding invitations - Ampersand by Melanie Winters

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Melanie Winters on Oct 20, 2016 at 1:23pm
Melanie Winters
  • Minted Sep 8, 2016
  • 33 Comments made
  • 952 Votes cast

Any feedback on how to take this to the next level is greatly appreciated! Thanks!

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Mayflower Press on Oct 24, 2016 at 12:19pm
Mayflower Press
  • Minted May 10, 2016
  • 6 Awards
  • 364 Comments made
  • 2026 Votes cast

I think you could improve this by limiting the amount of typefaces used and how they are used. Try sticking to just two. I love the gold against the navy though!

J. Dario Design Co. on Oct 27, 2016 at 8:43am
J. Dario Design Co.
  • Minted Jul 26, 2014
  • 14 Awards
  • 106 Comments made
  • 17241 Votes cast

Love the color scheme and the gradient on your gold - very sophisticated. I agree with limiting the typefaces...there are too many competing. I would try using one consistent typeface for everything from "invite you" through the address (so that the names and the ampersand are the visual strong points). I would also try giving a little more breathing room between the ampersand and the text. They are very close and competing for your eye right now. I would make the ampersand and the names be the initial focus, and the wedding details more consistent and condensed. I like the font choice on the names, and your text treatment up there...would leave that as is, just give some more space between it and the ampersand. Perhaps just try moving the ampersand left and see how that looks?