valentine's day - LOVE Marquee

Tags: valentine's day, valentine, hearts, fun, happy, colorful

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jeanne smith
  • Minted Nov 11, 2012
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comments from jeanne:

a large LOVE marquee makes a heartfelt statement for a fun and happy valentine message ...

tags:

valentine's day, valentine, hearts, fun, happy, colorful

colors shown:

red, mustard

fonts:

marquee, black diamond, bikini

design inspired by:

Classroom Valentine

submitted on:

Oct 03 2016

Edited on:

Oct 04 2016

average score:

2.00

comments:

0

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valentine's day - LOVE Marquee by jeanne smith

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Version 3 - submitted on Oct 04 2016 - no comments

Version 2 (poll) - submitted on Oct 04 2016 - hide

Ilze Lucero on Oct 4, 2016 at 8:58am
Ilze Lucero
  • Minted Jun 16, 2015
  • 20 Awards
  • 6788 Comments made
  • 83695 Votes cast

I like the a option, but I almost wish that the writing was white and inside the heart

Version 1 - submitted on Oct 03 2016 - hide

Stacey Hill on Oct 3, 2016 at 11:31am
Stacey Hill
  • Minted Mar 17, 2011
  • 42 Awards
  • 408 Comments made
  • 18607 Votes cast

I love the woodcut look of the heart but I think there may be too many other elements competing. What about filling the card with one of the hearts or making the pattern cover the entire card but larger - maybe like a Warhol with different colours?

Melanie Winters on Oct 3, 2016 at 6:56pm
Melanie Winters
  • Minted Sep 8, 2016
  • 33 Comments made
  • 952 Votes cast

Lot's of cool design elements here but a bit overwhelming. The family name gets lost easily with everything else going on. I agree with Stacey's suggestion below about utilizing a single heart or making it a pattern that fills the entire card. The "LOVE" at the bottom doesn't seem to fit the rest of the card.