save the date cards - Tropical

Tags: save the date cards, foil-pressed, tropical, beach, pineapple, sunrise, olive green, gold foil, champagne

Designers were asked to submit a chic and modern design. If you see a design that is not available for sale, please email us and we will help you purchase the design.

About Katreena

Kat Locsin
  • Minted Sep 5, 2016
  • 22 Comments made
  • 215 Votes cast

Share This Design

To link to this design on other websites, copy & paste this HTML.

About the Design

comments from Katreena:

Save the date card for all beach weddings.

tags:

save the date cards, foil-pressed, tropical, beach, pineapple, sunrise, olive green, gold foil, champagne

colors shown:

orange, green olive, yellow, red, gold

fonts:

quickpen

design inspired by:

A7 Save the Date Card

submitted on:

Sep 15 2016

average score:

2.05

comments:

2

Lucky in Love Save the Date Challenge - See designs critique this design

rating closed
final average score: 2.05
rating distribution
5
4
3
2
1
save the date cards - Tropical by Kat Locsin

featured

Kat Locsin on Sep 16, 2016 at 8:19am
Kat Locsin
  • Minted Sep 5, 2016
  • 22 Comments made
  • 215 Votes cast

Points for improvement

comments

Janelle Wourms on Sep 19, 2016 at 10:16am
Janelle Wourms
  • Minted Sep 8, 2015
  • 4 Awards
  • 711 Comments made
  • 8707 Votes cast

I'd consider moving the headline to the lower area and reducing the amount of text. Most of the information would instead appear on the invitation.

Version 2 (poll) - submitted on Sep 21 2016 - hide

Sara Curtis on Sep 24, 2016 at 8:32am
Sara Curtis
  • Minted Sep 6, 2014
  • 3 Awards
  • 316 Comments made
  • 18626 Votes cast

I like the pineapple design on the background! I think if you simplify these a little bit, it would appeal to a larger crowd. The black line feels a little harsh with the pastel background. If you switch it to a gray or taupe, it will blend better with the design. I would also recommending choosing just one of the fonts you have here and pairing it with simple sans serif font. The ones you have are all script or hand-drawn, and the eye needs a place to rest on something easier to read. It really has a a lot of potential with a couple of changes! :)

Annie Montgomery on Sep 25, 2016 at 12:04pm
Annie Montgomery
  • Minted May 14, 2012
  • 48 Awards
  • 1025 Comments made
  • 12073 Votes cast

B! it feels more balanced ;)

Version 1 - submitted on Sep 21 2016 - no comments