design - My Heart Tingles for the Bay

Tags: design, San Francisco Type, Nastaglic, Travel Era, Gold Gate Bridge, Water, Evironment Simple, caroleeXpressions, Carole Crohan

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comments from Carole:

Warm colors of a wonderful visit to the Golden Gate Bridge in the bay.

tags:

design, San Francisco Type, Nastaglic, Travel Era, Gold Gate Bridge, Water, Evironment Simple, caroleeXpressions, Carole Crohan

colors shown:

Orange, Magenta, Teal, Dark Teal, Yellow White

fonts:

Futura Bold

design inspired by:

Art Print

submitted on:

Jun 28 2016

Edited on:

Jul 04 2016

average score:

3.02

comments:

6

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design - My Heart Tingles for the Bay by CaroleeXpressions

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Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Jul 5, 2016 at 2:40am
Oma N. Ramkhelawan
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Love the changes!!!

Belia Simm on Aug 12, 2016 at 1:19pm
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Congrats Carol!

Alison Jerry Designs on Aug 12, 2016 at 1:25pm
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Congratulations!

Susan Moyal on Aug 12, 2016 at 5:00pm
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Congratulations Carole! Love this so much

Kate Ross on Aug 12, 2016 at 6:40pm
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Congratulations Carole!! Yay you!

Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Aug 13, 2016 at 4:13am
Oma N. Ramkhelawan
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Congrats Carol!!!! I knew this was a stunner from the beginning! Great work!

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Oma N. Ramkhelawan on Jun 30, 2016 at 2:31am
Oma N. Ramkhelawan
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I love this Carole! Especially your color palette!!! My only suggestion would be to maybe put the San Francisco below the illustration because you have a lot of space there and it might balance it out perfectly. A poll maybe?

Janelle Wourms on Jul 1, 2016 at 9:30am
Janelle Wourms
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Interesting illustration. I agree with Oma. It feels off with the weight and balance. I like the lines extending out of the center orange rectangle but not as much beyond the mountain or bridge. Could you try cropping the entire thing in tighter by a half inch or more so the lines are cropped and there's less negative space around the edge? The typeface plays well with the weight you have in the illustration.

Mansi on Jul 1, 2016 at 6:53pm
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Agree with Oma! Beautiful !