new year's cards - Geometric Flower

Tags: new year's cards, green, shapes, flower, geometric

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Ilidia Nicholas
  • Minted Feb 28, 2015
  • 14 Comments made
  • 639 Votes cast

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comments from Ilidia:

Fun, geometric, flower design

tags:

new year's cards, green, shapes, flower, geometric

colors shown:

Navy, Forest Green, Gold, Cream

fonts:

Enchanted Brush, Gabriola

design inspired by:

New Year's Photo Card

submitted on:

Jun 13 2016

Edited on:

Jun 17 2016

average score:

1.90

comments:

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new year's cards - Geometric Flower by Ilidia Nicholas

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Ilidia Nicholas on Jun 13, 2016 at 8:27pm
Ilidia Nicholas
  • Minted Feb 28, 2015
  • 14 Comments made
  • 639 Votes cast

I feel like there's just something missing but don't know what! Any ideas?

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Dawn Jasper on Jun 29, 2016 at 6:41am
Dawn Jasper
  • Minted Jan 16, 2010
  • 51 Awards
  • 7958 Comments made
  • 149857 Votes cast

sorry I didn't get a chance to come back to this but it looks great! Love the simplification. Best of luck in the challenge!

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Dawn Jasper on Jun 16, 2016 at 7:56am
Dawn Jasper
  • Minted Jan 16, 2010
  • 51 Awards
  • 7958 Comments made
  • 149857 Votes cast

Your flowers are really interesting and cool! I think this could use a bit of simplification though. Have you tried only one flower and having the year above the greeting instead of overlapping the photo?

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Ella Weaver on Jun 15, 2016 at 10:29am
Ella Weaver
  • Minted Apr 4, 2013
  • 12 Awards
  • 1420 Comments made
  • 12826 Votes cast

I don't think the year and the flower bursts really go together. Have you tried removing the year or if you want to leave it, changing the gold borders on the flowers to foil? If you just remove the year, you could scoot the bottom flower over toward the photo just a tad to balance things out. I also think the family name would make more impact in a non italic with the tracking bumped up. And you don't need the apostrophe on the family!