non-photo holiday cards - Oh What Fun Let's Take a Break

Tags: non-photo holiday cards, holiday, Office, Break Oh What Fun

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About BRONWYNE

Bronwyne Carr Chapman
  • Minted Nov 5, 2015
  • 61 Comments made
  • 4766 Votes cast

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comments from BRONWYNE:

Let's take a break...Oh What Fun.

tags:

non-photo holiday cards, holiday, Office, Break Oh What Fun

colors shown:

green, red, black

fonts:

Helten family

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

May 13 2016

Edited on:

May 15 2016

average score:

1.85

comments:

2

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non-photo holiday cards - Oh What Fun Let's Take a Break by Bronwyne Carr Chapman

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Ilze Lucero on May 18, 2016 at 12:06pm
Ilze Lucero
  • Minted Jun 16, 2015
  • 19 Awards
  • 6692 Comments made
  • 78225 Votes cast

Make sure that the writing is centered and balanced, it seems a tad off

Sari Victoria on May 20, 2016 at 9:56am
Sari Victoria
  • Minted Jan 24, 2010
  • 2 Awards
  • 517 Comments made
  • 6754 Votes cast

Nice one. I don't think you need the red border. I also agree with IIze and the "wishing you..." is a little off center.

Version 3 - submitted on May 13 2016 - hide

Kayla Penner on May 14, 2016 at 3:39pm
Kayla Penner
  • Minted Feb 11, 2016
  • 910 Comments made
  • 4632 Votes cast

Hi! My only suggestion would be to move the bottom greeting down a little to give the top some breathing room

Version 2 - submitted on May 13 2016 - no comments

Version 1 - submitted on May 13 2016 - hide

taryn bone on May 13, 2016 at 5:22pm
taryn bone
  • Minted Nov 17, 2015
  • 660 Comments made
  • 2140 Votes cast

cute and simple! Maybe you could play with the text "let's take..." being red or dark grey, instead of harsher black.