non-photo holiday cards - PeaceLoveJoy

Tags: non-photo holiday cards, typography, lace, love, joy, peace,

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andrea espinosa
  • Minted Jan 8, 2013
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  • 35 Comments made
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About the Design

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Lettering based on calligraphy made from scratch. the movement and colors will reming us of the holidays.

tags:

non-photo holiday cards, typography, lace, love, joy, peace,

colors shown:

red rose, aqua green and white.

fonts:

Gotham and personal calligraphy,

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

May 07 2016

Edited on:

May 08 2016

average score:

2.18

comments:

3

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non-photo holiday cards - PeaceLoveJoy by andrea espinosa

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andrea espinosa on May 8, 2016 at 3:23pm
andrea espinosa
  • Minted Jan 8, 2013
  • 2 Awards
  • 35 Comments made
  • 1440 Votes cast

Thanks Shannon! I do think without the hairlines looks much cleaner. thanks for the feedback about the "star".

Ilze Lucero on May 9, 2016 at 8:10pm
Ilze Lucero
  • Minted Jun 16, 2015
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Lovely overlay design, Beautiful looping

Kayla Penner on May 10, 2016 at 7:26pm
Kayla Penner
  • Minted Feb 11, 2016
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Sweet design, my only suggestions would be to make the personalization areas less subtle and make the star a little bigger as it seems to get lost with the size

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andrea espinosa on May 8, 2016 at 11:58am
andrea espinosa
  • Minted Jan 8, 2013
  • 2 Awards
  • 35 Comments made
  • 1440 Votes cast

Thanks taryn bone and Shannon, I made changes with your feedback thanks so much!

Shannon on May 8, 2016 at 2:47pm
Shannon
  • Minted May 20, 2013
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You know what, I had missed the star in your first version! I'm seeing it now that you darkened it a bit – that's a nice touch :) What would you think of moving the star off the other swashes (kind of nestle in in the top crux of the P)? I do think it adds to the design, but with it's placement now I don't feel like it's really receiving any emphasis. How do you feel about removing the hairlines? I do think it's bolder now, maybe even easier to read, but the hairline did give it a delicateness that isn't there as much now (how annoying am I ;) – maybe do a poll where the hairline is concerned?

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taryn bone on May 7, 2016 at 11:16pm
taryn bone
  • Minted Nov 17, 2015
  • 660 Comments made
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digging the fluid, infinity-esque tree in the background. Have you thought about putting a star on top, lighting and maybe in a yellow that is not too bright? It think that could help this to really pop.

Shannon on May 8, 2016 at 8:33am
Shannon
  • Minted May 20, 2013
  • 19 Awards
  • 2326 Comments made
  • 16252 Votes cast

Wow, this looks like it took some finesse – very nicely done! I find myself wondering if your inlines on the red type are adding to the design – maybe try a poll without them and see how it goes? The result may be just a bit more solid :)