holiday photo cards - Lights up

Tags: holiday photo cards, christmaslights, lights, bokeh, gold,goldenlights

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Minu Thickitt
  • Minted Feb 13, 2016
  • 12 Comments made
  • 539 Votes cast

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Light up everybody's holidays with this Christmas lights bokeh design card

tags:

holiday photo cards, christmaslights, lights, bokeh, gold,goldenlights

colors shown:

yellow, white

fonts:

Magnolia,Palatino Linotype Italic

design inspired by:

Holiday Photo Card

submitted on:

Apr 17 2016

Edited on:

Apr 21 2016

average score:

2.39

comments:

0

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Minu Thickitt on Apr 17, 2016 at 5:41pm
Minu Thickitt
  • Minted Feb 13, 2016
  • 12 Comments made
  • 539 Votes cast

Appreciate your feedback - about design, font, layout ,etc. Thank you very much!

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Dawn Jasper on Apr 21, 2016 at 7:23am
Dawn Jasper
  • Minted Jan 16, 2010
  • 51 Awards
  • 7958 Comments made
  • 149857 Votes cast

That bokeh is really lovely. I don't think you need the outer frame around it at all (plus margins that size are so hard to keep even in production). I would also try moving all the text up from the bottom a bit more and maybe just everything in white?

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Jay Anne on Apr 17, 2016 at 11:11pm
Jay Anne
  • Minted Oct 22, 2013
  • 236 Comments made
  • 145 Votes cast

cool concepts! Maybe you can try a different font for Happy Holidays. something that is more festive.Best of luck on your design!

Debb W on Apr 18, 2016 at 9:01am
Debb W
  • Minted Jul 14, 2011
  • 11 Awards
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Hi Minu, With the yellow dots the yellow text and many swashes feel like too much. Maybe try a simplified font for happy holidays and make the text white? Since the design is for this holiday season the year can be 2016