birthday party invitations - Hop on Over

Tags: birthday party invitations, easter, bunny, brunch, egg hunt

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About Mallory

Texas Girls
  • Minted Jun 3, 2013
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comments from Mallory:

This bunny themed birthday party invitation should help put some pop in your bunny hop party!

tags:

birthday party invitations, easter, bunny, brunch, egg hunt

colors shown:

blue, pink, yellow, white

fonts:

Bodoni MT, Stringfellows

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Card

submitted on:

Mar 11 2016

Edited on:

Mar 16 2016

average score:

2.40

comments:

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birthday party invitations - Hop on Over by Texas Girls

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Version 2 (poll) - submitted on Mar 11 2016 - hide

Liz Conley on Mar 15, 2016 at 7:38pm
Liz Conley
  • Minted Dec 28, 2012
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I picked B - the blue on blue feels a bit to overwhelming for me but the pink contrasts nicely.

Version 1 - submitted on Mar 11 2016 - hide

Mandy Wilson on Mar 11, 2016 at 7:47pm
Mandy Wilson
  • Minted Feb 15, 2016
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Cute design and bunny. I would make the 'hop on over' all caps but fit inside the banner without touching the sides. Also, I would make the words have capitals. That is because it will be consistent with the name 'Amelia' and the phrase 'First Birthday' as well as "Reply to Carly'. Also, I would make the apostrophe a bit larger. It seems to disappear a bit.

Shannon on Mar 12, 2016 at 8:04am
Shannon
  • Minted May 20, 2013
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What a cute little bunny :) My daughter would be smiling from ear-to-ear! Did you use the blue background because you thought another color might bring it too far into an Easter look? I think a yellow background would take it to a really bright cheery place …then again it might take it all the way to Easter :)

Dawn Jasper on Mar 12, 2016 at 1:57pm
Dawn Jasper
  • Minted Jan 16, 2010
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Love the bunny! I'm not sure you really need the banner at all. Though I do like it, so maybe just make it fatter to give the "hop on over" text some breathing room on the top and bottom. I'd also try to put it on a path to match the arch of the banner. You could also remove "join us" since it feels a little redundant - that way it would just say hop on over for brunch :)

Katie Zimpel on Mar 12, 2016 at 4:52pm
Katie Zimpel
  • Minted Apr 11, 2012
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I like the idea of getting rid of the banner and changing "join us" to "hop on over." Then I think you could put an item in the bunny's arms. Like a gift or a balloon. That way it will read more birthday and less Easter.

Belia Simm on Mar 14, 2016 at 3:40pm
Belia Simm
  • Minted May 21, 2015
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Such cute design! Maybe try a pink version? for the plaid design and the bkg. The banner could be an aqua color.