birthday party invitations - Teddy Picnic

Tags: birthday party invitations, teddy bear, picnic, party hat

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A simple yet fun teddy bear picnic themed party invitations for your little ones.

tags:

birthday party invitations, teddy bear, picnic, party hat

colors shown:

brown, pink, white, blue, green, yellow, lavender, orange

fonts:

Enamel Inline, Business Penmanship, Engravers' Gothic BT, AmarilloUSAF

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

Mar 04 2016

Edited on:

Mar 15 2016

average score:

2.35

comments:

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final average score: 2.35
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birthday party invitations - Teddy Picnic by jellyjollyho

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Felix Grapes on Mar 18, 2016 at 7:55pm
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fancy bear illustration :)

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Dawn Jasper on Mar 10, 2016 at 7:18am
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A! I think it has a wonderful flow. Your illustration is so cute!

Anupama on Mar 10, 2016 at 9:47pm
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A for me

Dawn Jasper on Mar 12, 2016 at 9:29am
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I still love A and C is a very close second. This caught my eye again in the submissions and I'm wondering if it would work if instead of saying teddy bears it could say "it's a teddy bear" with the picnic flags underneath. It might help the whole thing read a little better.

Camilla Acosta on Mar 12, 2016 at 11:03am
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I chose A, it's more tied together. Great job.

Anna Elder on Mar 12, 2016 at 12:01pm
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A - darling design!

Haley Warner on Mar 14, 2016 at 3:01pm
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I like A! I think the curved banner adds something special and it feels the most clean and modern.

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Rheamae Barrit on Mar 6, 2016 at 10:42pm

A

raven erebus on Mar 6, 2016 at 11:58pm
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I like the colors for teddy bears-goes well with the flags!

Belia Simm on Mar 7, 2016 at 8:29am
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Going with B. It reads and flows better. Maybe have something like "join us for a" "Teddy Bear" "Picnic" and at the very end after the address or the RSVP something like "bring your teddy bear"?

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Ilze Lucero on Mar 4, 2016 at 5:18am
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Love the bear illustration, I'm just wondering if all the colors in the flags clash a bit too much and take away from the bear design

Little Print Design on Mar 4, 2016 at 8:17am
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super cute - love the little teddy bear! i think writing the words "teddy bears" on a curved line that flows with the banner curve would be cute! - just an idea :)

Jackie Crawford on Mar 4, 2016 at 8:56am
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The bear is super cute! I think the text is a little distracting. Maybe scale down the font or change the color? Hope that helps!

Charlotte Chave on Mar 4, 2016 at 9:04am
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I would change the TEDDY BEARS font to be the same as the script font underneath the teddy bear.I would also adjust the colors of the bunting / flags to be more pastel colors.

Diane Lynne on Mar 4, 2016 at 9:57am
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Yes, "Teddy Bears" is the first thing I see...what if you made Andrea's name in a different color and more saturated? Also, the letter C in Picnic is disappearing on me and since that is the only place you use bright yellow...on that flag, why not pull some pink from the teddy bear up there for more of a relationship and to unify the card? That's my take. Good Luck. I hope this was helpful. Diane Lynne

Katie Zimpel on Mar 4, 2016 at 11:17am
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I think the TEDDY BEARS is catching more attention that it should. I think TEDDY BEAR PICNIC needs to work together better. Maybe just have the bunting banner in the background? Or put TEDDY BEAR in a bunting banner too.

Al Pascucci on Mar 4, 2016 at 4:38pm
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Yes, but it's a good eye catcher. Did not notice the word Picnic or the rest of the copy until later on.

Agi Szabo on Mar 5, 2016 at 6:23am
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I agree with Charolotte... I would change the TEDDY BEARS font to be the same as the script font underneath the teddy bear.I would also adjust the colors of the bunting / flags to be more pastel colors.

Claudia Orengo on Mar 5, 2016 at 10:56am
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Hi Jelly, I don't think the Teddy Bears caption catches more attention than the name, I totally see first ANDREA not only because it's on the center of the design but also because it's bigger and with a stunning font. For me it's perfect ;) I like the idea that Little Print Design gave you about curving a little bit the Teddy Bears text so it follows the banner curve!

CaroleeXpressions on Mar 5, 2016 at 1:45pm
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The Bear and the colored flags don't have any of the same colors. and I think your right, the title, and the name are fighting for attention.

Mandy Wilson on Mar 5, 2016 at 10:14pm
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now that you mention it, the 'teddy bears' does compete a bit. you may not even need it since it is implied with 'join us with your teddy bears' Cute banner and bear!

Belia Simm on Mar 6, 2016 at 6:11am
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Really adorable. Maybe try a version without the 'Teddy Bears' and 'picnic' banner to keep the focus on the bear design and the child's name/age?

Jillanne Chimento on Mar 6, 2016 at 7:47am
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I think it does stand out a little too much... I would suggest trying "teddy bears" in the same script you used for "join us with your teddy bear". I think it would be nice because it would really tie the two together!

raven erebus on Mar 6, 2016 at 8:22am
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What if you used a lighter color for teddy bears, or a brighter color for the name?