birthday party invitations - Little Mariner

Tags: birthday party invitations, nautical, marine, fish, simple, cute, sailboat, lighthouse, whale

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jellyjollyho
  • Minted Sep 16, 2013
  • 45 Comments made
  • 565 Votes cast

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A simple, non-photo, nautical themed birthday invites for your little boy's first birthday party.

tags:

birthday party invitations, nautical, marine, fish, simple, cute, sailboat, lighthouse, whale

colors shown:

blue, white, gray, green

fonts:

CaferusBasic, Avant Garde Book BT, Arial Rounded MT Bold

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

Mar 07 2016

Edited on:

Mar 13 2016

average score:

2.73

comments:

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birthday party invitations - Little Mariner by jellyjollyho

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jellyjollyho on Mar 13, 2016 at 10:52pm
jellyjollyho
  • Minted Sep 16, 2013
  • 45 Comments made
  • 565 Votes cast

Any thoughts on the changes I've made? Thanks!

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Version 3 - submitted on Mar 13 2016 - hide

ashnee eiram on Mar 10, 2016 at 5:45pm
ashnee eiram
  • Minted Jan 25, 2016
  • 1 Award
  • 159 Comments made
  • 212 Votes cast

This is really cute jelly. But maybe you should remove the bubbles from the fish since they're not technically under the water :)

Dawn Jasper on Mar 12, 2016 at 9:32am
Dawn Jasper
  • Minted Jan 16, 2010
  • 49 Awards
  • 7817 Comments made
  • 144380 Votes cast

LOVE the changes you made to this! The vertical layout really helps to open everything up a big. I would nudge the "the big" away from the whale and up just a little more - it feels kinda tight in there. I'm wondering maybe moving the fish down into the copy would help, maybe under "is turning one or even just in the bottom corners? It looks fine like this too though so trust your gut :)

Version 2 - submitted on Mar 08 2016 - hide

heythird on Mar 8, 2016 at 9:14pm
heythird
  • Minted Jun 5, 2013
  • 24 Awards
  • 314 Comments made
  • 3888 Votes cast

This is super nice! But I'm not sure with the font style choices! Have you tried doing this in a a7 card? looks crowded!

Version 1 - submitted on Mar 07 2016 - hide

Dawn Jasper on Mar 8, 2016 at 5:05pm
Dawn Jasper
  • Minted Jan 16, 2010
  • 49 Awards
  • 7817 Comments made
  • 144380 Votes cast

I love all the objects! I'm not sure I'm crazy about the font for the name and date though. hmmm... maybe try the same treatment as "the big" - all caps and even kerning? I would also move those two words up away from the word one a bit - possibly even with the top of the whale's head.