birthday party invitations - Grab A Slice

Tags: birthday party invitations, pizza, slice, fun, party, navy, orange

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Jane CoCo Cowles
  • Minted Jan 23, 2016
  • 64 Comments made
  • 204 Votes cast

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comments from Jane:

pizza, fun, kids, birthday

tags:

birthday party invitations, pizza, slice, fun, party, navy, orange

colors shown:

navy, orange

fonts:

charter bold, charter

design inspired by:

Square Non-Photo Card

submitted on:

Mar 03 2016

Edited on:

Mar 09 2016

average score:

1.54

comments:

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birthday party invitations - Grab A Slice by Jane CoCo Cowles

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Version 2 - submitted on Mar 03 2016 - hide

Jane CoCo Cowles on Mar 4, 2016 at 6:43am
Jane CoCo Cowles
  • Minted Jan 23, 2016
  • 64 Comments made
  • 204 Votes cast

Thank you all for your comments.

Kayla Penner on Mar 9, 2016 at 2:01pm
Kayla Penner
  • Minted Feb 11, 2016
  • 910 Comments made
  • 4632 Votes cast

I think Saturday and May should be capitalized since everything else is underneath

Version 1 - submitted on Mar 03 2016 - hide

Jane CoCo Cowles on Mar 3, 2016 at 7:18pm
Jane CoCo Cowles
  • Minted Jan 23, 2016
  • 64 Comments made
  • 204 Votes cast

What do you think of the overall design?

ashnee eiram on Mar 3, 2016 at 9:47pm
ashnee eiram
  • Minted Jan 25, 2016
  • 1 Award
  • 159 Comments made
  • 212 Votes cast

Try to remove the stroke from the pepperoni's. And maybe move the date and venue slightly down so it isn't too close to the pizza.

Jay Anne on Mar 3, 2016 at 10:08pm
Jay Anne
  • Minted Oct 22, 2013
  • 236 Comments made
  • 145 Votes cast

love your concepts. Maybe you can use just one shade of red. Right now the text looks to bright