birthday party invitations - Double Trouble

Tags: birthday party invitations, birthday, party, double trouble, kids, handwritten, photo

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Dandelion Paper Co.
  • Minted Mar 8, 2016
  • 32 Comments made
  • 48 Votes cast

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This fun, single-photo birthday party invitation is perfect for your kids who get to celebrate their birthday together!

tags:

birthday party invitations, birthday, party, double trouble, kids, handwritten, photo

colors shown:

black and gold

fonts:

Ayanami, AppleSpice

design inspired by:

Square Photo Card

submitted on:

Mar 08 2016

average score:

1.85

comments:

5

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birthday party invitations - Double Trouble by Dandelion Paper Co.

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Dandelion Paper Co. on Mar 8, 2016 at 9:58am
Dandelion Paper Co.
  • Minted Mar 8, 2016
  • 32 Comments made
  • 48 Votes cast

Redesign on the layout. Any feedback would be helpful! Thanks!

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Dawn Jasper on Mar 8, 2016 at 4:54pm
Dawn Jasper
  • Minted Jan 16, 2010
  • 46 Awards
  • 7817 Comments made
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I think I would make "double trouble" your main focus. Maybe "It's double trouble for..." Then try moving the "join us for a birthday party" down above the date info.

Annie on Mar 9, 2016 at 7:14am

Dawn's feedback would be interesting to see. I think it's a darling idea. Something about the golden color is hard for me to see. Maybe try a shade or two darker? The font is a good choice. Maybe try what Dawn suggested.

Mandy Wilson on Mar 9, 2016 at 8:48am
Mandy Wilson
  • Minted Feb 15, 2016
  • 64 Comments made
  • 5645 Votes cast

Maybe circles around the numbers or something to make them stand out a bit. It seems to compete with the "double trouble"

Katie Zimpel on Mar 9, 2016 at 9:53am
Katie Zimpel
  • Minted Apr 11, 2012
  • 38 Awards
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I think the type are too much of the same size. Kinda like what Dawn said, I'd pick one phrase to be the main focus, make it bigger, and make everything else smaller.

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chocomocacino on Mar 17, 2016 at 2:25am
chocomocacino
  • Minted Feb 23, 2010
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