birthday party invitations - Pool Party!

Tags: birthday party invitations, pool, party, birthday bash, water, swimming

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Mandy Wilson
  • Minted Feb 15, 2016
  • 64 Comments made
  • 5645 Votes cast

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comments from Mandy:

This single photo lively Pool Party birthday invitation is an exciting way to invite friends using a border of water splashes and water squiggles.

tags:

birthday party invitations, pool, party, birthday bash, water, swimming

colors shown:

blue, black, red

fonts:

BlackChancery, Myriad Pro

design inspired by:

A7 Photo Card

submitted on:

Mar 05 2016

Edited on:

Mar 08 2016

average score:

1.67

comments:

0

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birthday party invitations - Pool Party! by Mandy Wilson

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ashnee eiram on Mar 7, 2016 at 3:37am
ashnee eiram
  • Minted Jan 25, 2016
  • 1 Award
  • 159 Comments made
  • 212 Votes cast

Maybe you should try removing the white wave at the top of the photo? Just a thought.

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CaroleeXpressions on Mar 6, 2016 at 5:26pm
CaroleeXpressions
  • Minted Sep 14, 2014
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  • 1541 Comments made
  • 40627 Votes cast

The red type needs to be brighter.

24th and Dune on Mar 6, 2016 at 5:39pm
24th and Dune
  • Minted Sep 1, 2010
  • 52 Awards
  • 1178 Comments made
  • 26204 Votes cast

A for me, it's more streamlined so my eye goes right from the photo to the information.

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Jillanne Chimento on Mar 6, 2016 at 7:50am
Jillanne Chimento
  • Minted Jan 8, 2016
  • 1 Award
  • 46 Comments made
  • 145 Votes cast

Yes, I think it takes away from the photo. I would take that away, and since it's a pool party, try making the waves framing the photo in different blues- I think that would make them read more as waves!

Katie Zimpel on Mar 6, 2016 at 9:15am
Katie Zimpel
  • Minted Apr 11, 2012
  • 38 Awards
  • 947 Comments made
  • 16265 Votes cast

I would get rid of the silhouette of the kid in the bottom left corner. The wavy border has enough interest.

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