birthday party invitations - Summer Pool Party

Tags: birthday party invitations, pool party, pool, party, summer, water

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Rebecca Pierpoint
  • Minted Feb 25, 2016
  • 16 Comments made
  • 1221 Votes cast

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comments from rebecca:

A perfect invitation for your fun pool party!

tags:

birthday party invitations, pool party, pool, party, summer, water

colors shown:

red, orange, blue, yellow

fonts:

Aileron, Quicksand

design inspired by:

A7 Non-Photo Card

submitted on:

Mar 03 2016

average score:

2.15

comments:

6

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birthday party invitations - Summer Pool Party by Rebecca Pierpoint

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ashnee eiram on Mar 3, 2016 at 10:22pm
ashnee eiram
  • Minted Jan 25, 2016
  • 1 Award
  • 159 Comments made
  • 212 Votes cast

Maybe try using a different font for "pool party". Something with a soft curve to it so it better matches the design and theme :)

Jay Anne on Mar 3, 2016 at 11:25pm
Jay Anne
  • Minted Oct 22, 2013
  • 236 Comments made
  • 145 Votes cast

I would have to agree with ashnee.. also do you mean to say "snacks will be provided"? no?

Ilze Lucero on Mar 4, 2016 at 5:32am
Ilze Lucero
  • Minted Jun 16, 2015
  • 20 Awards
  • 6923 Comments made
  • 87985 Votes cast

This card seems a bit too " grown up" for 3. Maybe consider a older aage and possibly make a bigger font size for the age

Kayla Penner on Mar 9, 2016 at 1:56pm
Kayla Penner
  • Minted Feb 11, 2016
  • 910 Comments made
  • 4632 Votes cast

I think the @ should be replaced with "at" and take out the # as well because it seems to take away from the design. Love the shapes and patterns!

Haley Warner on Mar 14, 2016 at 5:08pm
Haley Warner
  • Minted Jan 3, 2015
  • 37 Awards
  • 1172 Comments made
  • 1636 Votes cast

Cute design! The only thing I would change is maybe center the text instead of having it flush left. I think that would make everything look more balanced and get rid of some of the unnecessary white space on the right.

Debb W on Mar 18, 2016 at 10:18am
Debb W
  • Minted Jul 14, 2011
  • 11 Awards
  • 7963 Comments made
  • 102532 Votes cast

Hi Rebecca, I'm in the process of voting and this caught my eye. Fun design, good luck!